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    Thought's on first large piece?

    This is the first time I've made my own background, so there's no depth to it. I don't have much hope for this piece, just wanting to get opinions for the future,


    Cnc? Would appreciate a guide to backgrounds aswell. Thanks.


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    Only the text and the white border should leave. the rest is fine as it is.
    A wallpaper in my opinon should be simple, never too much elaborated
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    I think you should make an obvious difference between the swords and the background, I feel like the character doesn't really blend in, you know? Like he ain't there. Otherwise, text font could do better but for the rest its k
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    Quote Originally Posted by Frost View Post
    I think you should make an obvious difference between the swords and the background, I feel like the character doesn't really blend in, you know? Like he ain't there. Otherwise, text font could do better but for the rest its k
    Yeah, I just didn't want to do too much seeing as the render wasn't low quality and it was only my first piece. Thanks for the CnC!

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    Only the text and the white border should leave. the rest is fine as it is.
    A wallpaper in my opinon should be simple, never too much elaborated
    Ok, thank you!


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    I feel like because of the lack of blending with the character and the background it leads to the piece lacking depth.
    And then your eyes role over the text and then you realize that the piece was ruined because of the text.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    I feel like because of the lack of blending with the character and the background it leads to the piece lacking depth.
    And then your eyes role over the text and then you realize that the piece was ruined because of the text.
    Ok, so next time I shouldn't make my own background, and then focus on blending the render onto it?
    Also, I see everyone being told text ruins pictures, is their a definitive guide to what ruins a picture and what doesn't? I've recently seen people say your text ruins pictures, so could you let me know what helped you improve- if it's practice i'm gonna need more help lol.


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    Quote Originally Posted by hezz View Post
    Ok, so next time I shouldn't make my own background, and then focus on blending the render onto it?
    Also, I see everyone being told text ruins pictures, is their a definitive guide to what ruins a picture and what doesn't? I've recently seen people say your text ruins pictures, so could you let me know what helped you improve- if it's practice i'm gonna need more help lol.
    Yea I still have yet to learn how to do Text, don't work on text.
    Work on MAKING BACKGROUDNS with your render and making them have depth and flow

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