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    Looks good, saturation of background vs render is sorta odd.


    Looks good though

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    I really like this, but this needs blending, it looks like you've just smacked the render and C4ds onto it.


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    Thanks hezz for suggestion

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    Because of your render placement, it makes it feel like everything was just slapped on...
    Your render is so low and we can see very little of him which makes it feel like the piece is just collapsing on itself...
    It has a good start on flow so you seem to understand the basics of flow but you lack depth...
    And just ew, get rid of that text...
    I myself have yet to figure out text and I just go without it, as it ruins pieces and it would look better without text.
    So stay away from text man, I highly suggest it...
    Your c4d and bubbles are lacking depth, there seems to be something weird with your lighting, and due to that. It contributes to the lack of depth.

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    Don't like the font... Just doesn't fit in for my liking.