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    CnC appreciated. :3

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    10/10 no flaws from my point of view. Love it. it's rare for me to see some piece like this.
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    It's not balanced. Try and follow the thirds with your focal points.


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    for me is perfect ,very great work

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post
    It's not balanced. Try and follow the thirds with your focal points.

    Ah, thanks for the input.

    I don't really know what that the "thirds" are, I'm still very very new to graphic designing. x.x

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nymil View Post
    Ah, thanks for the input.

    I don't really know what that the "thirds" are, I'm still very very new to graphic designing. x.x
    This is a photo tutorial, but you can pull the gist from it. http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tut...-of-thirds.htm

    You want to meet people's wandering eyes with your focal points.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ryan View Post


    This is a photo tutorial, but you can pull the gist from it. http://www.cambridgeincolour.com/tut...-of-thirds.htm

    You want to meet people's wandering eyes with your focal points.

    I see, that's some helpful info. Thanks! I'll try to apply it on my next work.

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    I agree with Ryan. Everything that is interesting to look at is pushed out towards the edges and we're left with an awkward void in the centre of the image. However, in saying that this is definitely the best one you've done. Whilst technically it is simple, the lighting and both vibrant and dark blue tones work really well aesthetically. Just work on the composition; I'd also like for you to make a more traditional horizontal sig, plus I'd say you would better luck learning the rule of thirds in that form.

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    very nice

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    I love the way the butterflies give off a very visible glow, and the flow in this piece is just amazing! I can't think of any flaws at this moment, and I don't feel re-positioning it to the 3rds thingy would improve it much.


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    Yea I'm w/ @Ryan here
    And I feel like a little more like "effects" could be added just to give it umph...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doc View Post
    I agree with Ryan. Everything that is interesting to look at is pushed out towards the edges and we're left with an awkward void in the centre of the image. However, in saying that this is definitely the best one you've done. Whilst technically it is simple, the lighting and both vibrant and dark blue tones work really well aesthetically. Just work on the composition; I'd also like for you to make a more traditional horizontal sig, plus I'd say you would better luck learning the rule of thirds in that form.
    I see.. That makes more sense, and explains a lot to me in what I should improve. I hope I'll create a better tag next time, maybe a horizontal one, since I've barely done those. Thanks for the input!

    Quote Originally Posted by hezz View Post
    I love the way the butterflies give off a very visible glow, and the flow in this piece is just amazing! I can't think of any flaws at this moment, and I don't feel re-positioning it to the 3rds thingy would improve it much.
    Thank you! I'm not sure how would re-positioning it work, but hey, it might as well if many experienced people do it.

    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post
    Yea I'm w/ @Ryan here
    And I feel like a little more like "effects" could be added just to give it umph...
    I know, but adding anything more would make it a bit less realistic in my opinion. It'd just clutter up the scene.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nymil View Post
    I see.. That makes more sense, and explains a lot to me in what I should improve. I hope I'll create a better tag next time, maybe a horizontal one, since I've barely done those. Thanks for the input!



    Thank you! I'm not sure how would re-positioning it work, but hey, it might as well if many experienced people do it.



    I know, but adding anything more would make it a bit less realistic in my opinion. It'd just clutter up the scene.
    This is where you've gone wrong...
    You don't have to add anything huge just something to make it not be as bland.
    Like a simple flare/ fractal somewhere.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    This is where you've gone wrong...
    You don't have to add anything huge just something to make it not be as bland.
    Like a simple flare/ fractal somewhere.
    I disagree, adding in any kind of faux lighting effects would betray the incredibly natural feel that everything has.

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