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    What you think? CnC please.
    Tried to keep it simple.
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    Those lines behind the render don't fit imo, the blur around her shoulder looks clumsy.
    That horizontal line should go behind the plush but still in front of the girl, that way it'd feel locked within' the image, rather than placed upon it.
    The two darker lines on the left and right sides feel weird, lastly some letters are a little blurred (especially the N).

    If we wanted to be technical, the light in the render comes from the front-left, while in the image as a whole it comes from the back, but that's not a big deal.

    What i'd like you to do is to fix that horizontal line as mentioned above and see the difference: it'd look just as simple but it'd blend much better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    Those lines behind the render don't fit imo, the blur around her shoulder looks clumsy.
    That horizontal line should go behind the plush but still in front of the girl, that way it'd feel locked within' the image, rather than placed upon it.
    The two darker lines on the left and right sides feel weird, lastly some letters are a little blurred (especially the N).

    If we wanted to be technical, the light in the render comes from the front-left, while in the image as a whole it comes from the back, but that's not a big deal.

    What i'd like you to do is to fix that horizontal line as mentioned above and see the difference: it'd look just as simple but it'd blend much better.
    If I don't give it a go tonight, ill do it near weekend. Thanks for the tips!
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    Quote Originally Posted by IV2B View Post
    That horizontal line should go behind the plush
    First think I noticed as well.

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    And the line needs to behind render as mentioned and maybe add more than just one so it doesn't just look random?

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