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    me and friend get into a tight freestyle battl

    [html]lol idk why..im not that good. however tell me who won. im codine :] oh and i mention in the rap his dads afghani, but actually hes more dominican republican then afghani lol

    there mad typing mistakes so try to understand lol
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    sb2marz 7:49 pm
    lol and wat does ur status mean?
    codine333 7:50 pm
    u made me lose in carzy taxi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    oh
    lol idk
    sb2marz 7:50 pm
    lmao
    its cool
    codine333 7:50 pm
    i was playing and ur message popped up and i lost :[
    lol
    sb2marz 7:50 pm
    but i can do better
    codine333 7:50 pm
    really
    here sumthing i freestyled
    not a theory but a fact,

    the way i adapt to my rap that ppl givin me a dap.

    They not be sayin shit cuz thats like sptting on my face,

    a disgrace,

    nah niqa,

    ima make you lose the trace of your race.

    so u can work through this insanity of your humanity,

    without getting pissed or shouting out some profanity.

    throught this crazy sick disease in my mind,

    i find that my life has turned blind,

    no longer my eyes can find, me being kind,

    to ppl on the streets,

    cuz all i care about is making beats,

    making sure there is some word to the lyric.

    however i feel like i am being mimicked.

    my life slowly is being vanished,

    and from the hell me being banished,

    ..now i gotta embrace the people i love cuz i am dying in pain.

    the blood stain,

    in my soul caused another hole,

    so now i gotta end this rythm of rappin in control

    sb2marz 7:52 pm
    ok ok guud guud but add more life to it
    codine333 7:54 pm
    niqa dont tell me what to do. suppose i get mad ima punch u so hard that u wished u were ur afghani dad. stop suckin me, let me rap, i know even though i cant rap, and that u dont give a crap. but fuck it im still better is lyrics and im not a freak on the streets, ima eat u alive, ima make u strive. ima make u feel like that youve just been burned with a tan on ur ass. cuz im mad getto like dat
    betten in lyrics*
    lol
    yah im not good in freestylin
    but thxs for the advice
    sb2marz 7:57 pm
    i can kill it check this
    codine333 7:57 pm
    k
    strat the rap battle now
    go u first
    sb2marz 7:58 pm
    im killlin it when i spit my rhymes
    i can tell you of all the times
    when i fought with niqqas like yur brother
    and felt creeped out by yur mother
    but its all good cuz im yur friend
    sb2marz 7:59 pm
    and we will always stick together until the end
    codine333 7:59 pm
    thats it lol watch this
    u think u killing with ryhme, alrite thats fine
    but whats my brother gotta do with this, lying doesnt do but make up shit
    creeped by my mother, but i just hope i dont get blow up by ur father
    and im not a good friend, im just cool with just u, u noe me cuz i went to school with you
    so stop talking shit, im trying to bite my lips
    from stop saying this, so u can stop getting dissed
    even if u think ur nice
    ur dirty got lice
    go take a shower
    smell some flower
    codine333 8:01 pm
    wait im not even done
    sb2marz 8:01 pm
    so you can smell like a flower
    codine333 8:01 pm
    so dont even start typing
    im just lying
    im just jokin
    just teasing and pokin
    just playin around with ya
    niqa u thought it was real, its fake duh
    so shut the fuck up i was just lying about ths as well
    ima make sure that i burn u so bad u go to hell
    sb2marz 8:02 pm
    lmao xD
    codine333 8:02 pm
    k
    ur turn
    sb2marz 8:02 pm
    ayt ima kill it
    gimme a beat cuz in 123 ima explode
    sb2marz 8:03 pm
    dont worry ima shake up the studio
    yu rep yur hood but when i rep im understood
    spit rhymes like pete rock and cl smooth
    better take cover cuz ima hit yu with a spin move
    ima smak your brother
    so he cry to yur mother
    ima beat his ass isn everythin
    from basketball to a michael jackson spin
    codine333 8:05 pm
    niqa
    sb2marz 8:05 pm
    i can do the moon walk better than hi fake a ss
    codine333 8:06 pm
    listen ur gonna smak my brother
    sb2marz 8:06 pm
    and he tries real hard to act like a spazz
    codine333 8:06 pm
    while ima smack ur mother
    sb2marz 8:06 pm
    lmao
    codine333 8:06 pm
    ritght on the ass
    ur just be the past
    to her ima be the future
    sb2marz 8:06 pm
    yu cant interrup t the rap yo
    codine333 8:06 pm
    recording sex with her on the computer
    lol i had to stop cuz my mom came.
    sb2marz 8:07 pm
    ok niqqa yu takin it too far
    codine333 8:07 pm
    well listen this ia rap battle, thats why they say dont start with me
    sb2marz 8:07 pm
    yea well yu got to chill out lol ur killin the spirit
    codine333 8:07 pm
    czu ima rap so hard u gonna feel like uve been stung with a mean ass bee
    ima leave u on the floor
    codine333 8:08 pm
    leave u crying with that uglly whole
    suppose
    i beat u up
    and blood comes out from your nose
    whore*
    ima take that glock up to ur head
    shoot u and leave u dead
    u cant mess with me
    u mess with me ima mess ur mind
    so u turn locally blind
    thats why ucant find
    sb2marz 8:09 pm
    nah u killed it lol
    codine333 8:09 pm
    any other ryhme
    to spit shit at me
    sb2marz 8:09 pm
    oh nvm
    codine333 8:09 pm
    i feel like ur a disgrace
    part of ur race
    u just lose it from the humanity trace
    trying to expose urself in front of guys
    thats true even if u say its a bunch of lies
    u noe u mad flage
    codine333 8:10 pm
    ima beat the shit out of u once i get baked
    i cant stop ending dis
    sb2marz 8:10 pm
    cuz ur goin madd hard
    codine333 8:10 pm
    cuz ur so whact just gota take out my fist
    ..kk fine lol
    sb2marz 8:10 pm
    spitting like a broken glass shard
    codine333 8:10 pm
    is that why ur a retard>
    sb2marz 8:10 pm
    whakkity wahk wahk thts all i hear
    codine333 8:11 pm
    cuz u noe inside u theres fear
    is that all you got only 3 likes of crap
    like i said earlier ur just whack
    u not gud with the lyrics
    when u try to write something ur gonna feel like ur being mimmicked
    sb2marz 8:11 pm
    ok its offiscially dead
    codine333 8:12 pm
    yea ur officially dead
    in bed
    cuz im fet
    up with this crap ur spitting
    tryna sell someweed, go elsewhere or ima make u bleed
    killed it :]
    fed*
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    k..my bad..ppl comment something :]

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    That was pretty good. I like the other guys lyrics better, but you weren't bad either.

    "Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired signifies, in the final sense, a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed. This world in arms is not spending money alone. It is spending the sweat of its laborers, the genius of its scientists, the hopes of its children. The cost of one modern heavy bomber is this: a modern brick school in more than 30 cities. It is two electric power plants, each serving a town of 60,000 population. It is two fine, fully equipped hospitals. It is some fifty miles of concrete pavement. We pay for a single fighter plane with a half million bushels of wheat. We pay for a single destroyer with new homes that could have housed more than 8,000 people. This is, I repeat, the best way of life to be found on the road the world has been taking. This is not a way of life at all, in any true sense. Under the cloud of threatening war, it is humanity hanging from a cross of iron."
    - Dwight D. Eisenhower

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    lol ty for ur opinion

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    LOl dudeee sweet rap
    Credits to Me:

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    that sucked so hard, it sounded like 2 little white rednecks attepting poetry

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    increase your vocabulary man, sorry to tell ya man but he killed you and stopped at right time :O
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    ahahahahaaaa

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    sb2marz 7:49 pm
    lol and wat does ur status mean?
    codine333 7:50 pm
    u made me lose in carzy taxi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    oh
    lol idk
    sb2marz 7:50 pm
    lmao
    its cool
    codine333 7:50 pm
    i was playing and ur message popped up and i lost :[
    lol
    sb2marz 7:50 pm
    but i can do better
    codine333 7:50 pm
    really
    here sumthing i freestyled
    not a theory but a fact,

    the way i adapt to my rap that ppl givin me a dap.

    They not be sayin shit cuz thats like sptting on my face,

    a disgrace,

    nah niqa,

    ima make you lose the trace of your race.

    so u can work through this insanity of your humanity,

    without getting pissed or shouting out some profanity.

    throught this crazy sick disease in my mind,

    i find that my life has turned blind,

    no longer my eyes can find, me being kind,

    to ppl on the streets,

    cuz all i care about is making beats,

    making sure there is some word to the lyric.

    however i feel like i am being mimicked.

    my life slowly is being vanished,

    and from the hell me being banished,

    ..now i gotta embrace the people i love cuz i am dying in pain.

    the blood stain,

    in my soul caused another hole,

    so now i gotta end this rythm of rappin in control

    sb2marz 7:52 pm
    ok ok guud guud but add more life to it
    codine333 7:54 pm
    niqa dont tell me what to do. suppose i get mad ima punch u so hard that u wished u were ur afghani dad. stop suckin me, let me rap, i know even though i cant rap, and that u dont give a crap. but fuck it im still better is lyrics and im not a freak on the streets, ima eat u alive, ima make u strive. ima make u feel like that youve just been burned with a tan on ur ass. cuz im mad getto like dat
    betten in lyrics*
    lol
    yah im not good in freestylin
    but thxs for the advice
    sb2marz 7:57 pm
    i can kill it check this
    codine333 7:57 pm
    k
    strat the rap battle now
    go u first
    sb2marz 7:58 pm
    im killlin it when i spit my rhymes
    i can tell you of all the times
    when i fought with niqqas like yur brother
    and felt creeped out by yur mother
    but its all good cuz im yur friend
    sb2marz 7:59 pm
    and we will always stick together until the end
    codine333 7:59 pm
    thats it lol watch this
    u think u killing with ryhme, alrite thats fine
    but whats my brother gotta do with this, lying doesnt do but make up shit
    creeped by my mother, but i just hope i dont get blow up by ur father
    and im not a good friend, im just cool with just u, u noe me cuz i went to school with you
    so stop talking shit, im trying to bite my lips
    from stop saying this, so u can stop getting dissed
    even if u think ur nice
    ur dirty got lice
    go take a shower
    smell some flower
    codine333 8:01 pm
    wait im not even done
    sb2marz 8:01 pm
    so you can smell like a flower
    codine333 8:01 pm
    so dont even start typing
    im just lying
    im just jokin
    just teasing and pokin
    just playin around with ya
    niqa u thought it was real, its fake duh
    so shut the fuck up i was just lying about ths as well
    ima make sure that i burn u so bad u go to hell
    sb2marz 8:02 pm
    lmao xD
    codine333 8:02 pm
    k
    ur turn
    sb2marz 8:02 pm
    ayt ima kill it
    gimme a beat cuz in 123 ima explode
    sb2marz 8:03 pm
    dont worry ima shake up the studio
    yu rep yur hood but when i rep im understood
    spit rhymes like pete rock and cl smooth
    better take cover cuz ima hit yu with a spin move
    ima smak your brother
    so he cry to yur mother
    ima beat his ass isn everythin
    from basketball to a michael jackson spin
    codine333 8:05 pm
    niqa
    sb2marz 8:05 pm
    i can do the moon walk better than hi fake a ss
    codine333 8:06 pm
    listen ur gonna smak my brother
    sb2marz 8:06 pm
    and he tries real hard to act like a spazz
    codine333 8:06 pm
    while ima smack ur mother

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    Quote Originally Posted by why06 View Post
    That was pretty good. I like the other guys lyrics better, but you weren't bad either.
    this wan it actually very good
    You want respect
    Earn it.

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    i do gotta increase vocabs. what can i do if he won, he copies his raps. btw rednecks lmao stfu lil kid,

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    I would wreck you both.

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    niqa? thats a dam fail xD

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