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    ay boe

    I made this for youtube channel I like it a lot, friends tell me it looks like shit or they don't like the text.

    What you guys think?
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    Looks great, I like the text. Did you use C4D renders?

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    Looks kinda bad because:
    too many colors, get a bg with max 2 colors and one of those colors should be text color ( even if a lighter version.)
    Ex. Back ground red and blue w/ bluish text.

    also get rid of some of those black C4Ds too much black.
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    Its alright. Its seems like there is to many things happening.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post
    Looks kinda bad because:
    too many colors, get a bg with max 2 colors and one of those colors should be text color ( even if a lighter version.)
    Ex. Back ground red and blue w/ bluish text.

    also get rid of some of those black C4Ds too much black.
    Exactly what I was gonna say D':

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Exactly what I was gonna say D':
    u rippoff'er get outta here joke
    Btw that avatar creeps me a bit
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post

    u rippoff'er get outta here joke
    Btw that avatar creeps me a bit
    Never have I changed my avatar mate xD



    See's my avatar must be nice person

    WRONG

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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Never have I changed my avatar mate xD



    See's my avatar must be nice person

    WRONG
    Ahahaahah cut it At least make it a dog or a sheep, if you know what I mean...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post

    Ahahaahah cut it At least make it a dog or a sheep, if you know what I mean...
    I already have a sheep haha
    @Organized Chaos's Sheep
    And my shepard is @Color's Sheep

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dattle View Post
    Looks great, I like the text. Did you use C4D renders?
    Yes , and thanks.

    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post
    Looks kinda bad because:
    too many colors, get a bg with max 2 colors and one of those colors should be text color ( even if a lighter version.)
    Ex. Back ground red and blue w/ bluish text.

    also get rid of some of those black C4Ds too much black.
    I wanted to create depth between the text , "meteor rocks" and galaxy but that shit hard.

    Thanks for the c&c but there's never "too much black"

    Quote Originally Posted by Petech01 View Post
    Its alright. Its seems like there is to many things happening.
    Only 3 things

    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Exactly what I was gonna say D':
    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post

    u rippoff'er get outta here joke
    Btw that avatar creeps me a bit
    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post


    Never have I changed my avatar mate xD



    See's my avatar must be nice person

    WRONG
    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post

    Ahahaahah cut it At least make it a dog or a sheep, if you know what I mean...
    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post

    I already have a sheep haha
    @Organized Chaos's Sheep
    And my shepard is @Color's Sheep
    Can ya'll do that shit some where else?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Organized Chaos View Post

    I already have a sheep haha
    @Organized Chaos's Sheep
    And my shepard is @Color's Sheep
    Who said a sheep can't have 2 shepherds?


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    Quote Originally Posted by Blake View Post

    Thanks for the c&c but there's never "too much black"
    Just for the record, I didnt imply anything racist.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mokou-Sama View Post

    Who said a sheep can't have 2 shepherds?


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    Just for the record, I didnt imply anything racist.
    Yea , I know but can you and the other guy take the conversation else where? thanks
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    Quote Originally Posted by Blake View Post


    Yea , I know but can you and the other guy take the conversation else where? thanks

    joke, we continue elsewhere.
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    I like it as a whole, there's just something weird about the font that I can't quite put my finger on

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    Quote Originally Posted by wakeboardnzx View Post
    I like it as a whole, there's just something weird about the font that I can't quite put my finger on
    This. I like it but I think it`s the color of the text that bothers me. Maybe like a darker color would work better.

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