Gift for you

Thanks for helping me all those times on TV Ryan, It means a lot.

V1
https://i53.tinypic.com/333bvia.png

V2
https://i53.tinypic.com/soc0bd.png

CnC

I love you.

You like it? :)
I think this is my best.

Trianglez?
That looks good like some abstract stuff Ryan would do

At least it's something different then what Ryan would do. You want your own style (in it's own way), that's good.

The orbs are bland, The effects are nice, but they're just fractals. The thing on the right side pops out too much, it's basically taking the focal over. It looks pretty washed out, and the top right fractal doesn't mesh.

the right rectangle is really solid more than its supposed to be

Yeah the right hand rectangle really isn't doing it for me, it looks like a banner that's missing text. Also, all the orbs stick out way too much so it makes it look like you just slapped a background layer right below them and it's not actually part of the picture, the lighting doesn't match.

tbh it reminds me more of forsakenfag than ryan
mainly cause u used too few shapes, placed them badly and used white connecting lines
u nood to work on compo the most
and have more in the fg not the bg

V1 and the shapes just...no, they make the art look plain and like scrw siad, u used lines to connect

Ryan's are still better by far, well i can't remember who started it, but i liked his the most.


ANYWAY its very good. Balls themselves could use more work, but great job overall.

Yuh, i just adopted the style from ryan like, two days ago. This is my second try at it.

Who's "you"?

Its on the first post, Ryan. /facefloor