here is my free style =) a lill sketchy buy ehhh

[Demo-Smash]

I got 2 youtube accounts, One is an offical and the second for tests and all that stuff.,

[ShAg12345]

well can they just listen to it to apporve it?? its a wav file inside a rar file for music hah

[Demo-Smash]

Yes they can, but mods are taking so long..

[ShAg12345]

aww well i will wait then no biggy haah just hope its today =(

[ShAg12345]

ok i am uploading it to youtube people =)

[Viibez]

use limelin*****m

upload your song there.

[ShAg12345]

ok theirs the youtube video =) please dont flame me to bad this wasnt that good i know but its what it is =)

[Wolf]

All you did was speak + Too many swear words + Sounded all wrong.

[Demo-Smash]

All you did was sing + Too many swear words + Sounded all wrong.

all u do is sucking cock all day long.

[ShAg12345]

Hum ok thank you wolf i will take your advise =)

[Krypton1x]

Hum ok thank you wolf i will take your advise =)

Don't worry, it was pretty good.

[ShAg12345]

Thank you vital =)

[Wolf]

Hum ok thank you wolf i will take your advise =)

Atleast you didn't cry like alot of people would do, it's probably better than I could do. I'm not good at saying what's good, just stuff you can improve on.

Lyrics were pretty good, dunno if they were your own but obviously scripted/thought about, so not really freestyle.

[haxa123]

your lyrics are good, but you gotta have more emotions when you talk :P

[Krypton1x]

Thank you vital =)

No problem, just put a little more emotion into it. You don't want it to sound plain.