ok this ones not as angry =)

[ShAg12345]

this ones not as angry as the last one and its sorta true but tell me what yall think hopefully this one people like more ahah =) orly

[Disturbed 24/7]

Link don't work. There ya go, listening now.

[ShAg12345]

ok its fixed

[Shark]

Is it a song?

Is it rap?

[ShAg12345]

not a rap ha more like a poem ha

[Disturbed 24/7]

Is it a song?

Is it rap?

Just listen. It's a poem/rap thing .

Good job, but you forgot some emotion /. x100000000 better than anything I could do

[Niku ・(￣∀￣)・]

more ok than last time :/
but still it crack me up..nuff said

[ShAg12345]

ha ok i will try agin but was this one better then the angry one?

[Shark]

I'm listening to music. Too lazy to pause. Nothankee.

[Disturbed 24/7]

ha ok i will try agin but was this one better then the angry one?

Yes .

[Shark]

By the way, there is a specific section for poetry/rap/gangster stories, brochan.

Go there.