Beauty

[Scrcrw]

Hey guys i was messing around today with this stock



And came up with this

V1
[IMG]https://i986.photobucke*****m/albums/ae349/Scrcrw/SIGS/beauty1.png[/IMG]
V2
[IMG]https://i986.photobucke*****m/albums/ae349/Scrcrw/SIGS/beauty2.png[/IMG]
V3
[IMG]https://i986.photobucke*****m/albums/ae349/Scrcrw/SIGS/beauty3.png[/IMG]
so rate comment and cnc

[R3V]

Ehh Simple

Im Not Loving it

But looks gewd

Nice Try

[Scrcrw]

i went for simple this time bro, i didnt feel like messing around cause im so tired after new years eve

[R3V]

Ahh True. u shud try putting lots of time into ur work, more u work on it, better the outcome

[Scrcrw]

i know, i know, i might redo this later, but seriously bro i had like 5 hrs sleep last night and im a bit wasted

[Kivrin0]

Not bad at all. Here's my suggestions:

- Change the font, bit generic and the colour doesn't suite.
- Bring out your stock more and if possible I wouldn't erase the sides of her. You want her to be sharp and eye-catching, not blending in.
- Try smudging her outwards in a circular pattern and setting those layers to overlay or linear dodge, that way she'd be more eye-catching.
- Also, try getting a 50px soft brush of a light cream colour and just do a little bit in between her hand and face, then set that layer to overlay. That'd help heaps

Just what I would do.

[Haze]

Text is pretty bad and it doesn't flow well. The black vectors should've been behind her or blended in better.

[Scrcrw]

Text is pretty bad and it doesn't flow well. The black vectors should've been behind her or blended in better.

im actually remaking this one with the vectors blending into her to get some more flow, and re doing the background