What do you guys think?

[Nik]

 

[Fucking Moron]

Otherwise all looks good on my end

[Asap]

Summarized CNC

Language: 9/10
The language is very understandable making it good.

Font: 4/10
I find that certain sections of your work are very hard to read because the font is so small, unreadable or doesn't stand out from the background;

- First banner with your logo the text was hard to read, I had to look more closely to see what it actually said instead of just looking at it and understanding it. Also under it, the text saying 'Hi, I'm...' did not stand out because it colour!
- Pricing section I could not see the text under 'pricing' because it was too small, shadow too thick and not readable.
- Terms and Conditions section had the same problem with the text being too small, shadow too thick and non readable.

Colour: 4/10
Again certain sections of your work does not cooperate well with your font and the colour of your font.

[Logic]

it's aight.

a bit to "bright" for my liking. but can't please everyone.

[Nik]

Updated First post with new edited version.

Otherwise all looks good on my end

Thanks for the feedback. I've fixed the font and background colour.

Summarized CNC

Language: 9/10
The language is very understandable making it good.

Font: 4/10
I find that certain sections of your work are very hard to read because the font is so small, unreadable or doesn't stand out from the background;

- First banner with your logo the text was hard to read, I had to look more closely to see what it actually said instead of just looking at it and understanding it. Also under it, the text saying 'Hi, I'm...' did not stand out because it colour!
- Pricing section I could not see the text under 'pricing' because it was too small, shadow too thick and not readable.
- Terms and Conditions section had the same problem with the text being too small, shadow too thick and non readable.

Colour: 4/10
Again certain sections of your work does not cooperate well with your font and the colour of your font.

Thanks for the detailed review. I've tried to fix everything you've listed. Made fonts bigger and a little more easier to read with colour contrast. I realised I had f.lux on the entire time, so it was was easier to read on my screen.

it's aight.

a bit to "bright" for my liking. but can't please everyone.

Lol. I was going for a happy type of vybe.

[koshinator]

I like it.

[Asap]

Updated First post with new edited version.



Thanks for the feedback. I've fixed the font and background colour.



Thanks for the detailed review. I've tried to fix everything you've listed. Made fonts bigger and a little more easier to read with colour contrast. I realised I had f.lux on the entire time, so it was was easier to read on my screen.




Lol. I was going for a happy type of vybe.

Yeah, now the contrast has improved but the text under 'pricing' is still too small and the font under your TOS gave my eyes autism.


As for your first banner with your logo and all, might I suggest stroke instead of shadow... See how it looks after :P

Edit: Also under 'pricing' try make that text bigger and instead of shadow, try stroke

[Nik]

Yeah, now the contrast has improved but the text under 'pricing' is still too small and the font under your TOS gave my eyes autism.


As for your first banner with your logo and all, might I suggest stroke instead of shadow... See how it looks after :P

Edit: Also under 'pricing' try make that text bigger and instead of shadow, try stroke

The thing under Terms of service, isn't very important, just kinda design thing so I'm going to leave it.
Also what do you mean by stroke?

[Asap]

The thing under Terms of service, isn't very important, just kinda design thing so I'm going to leave it.
Also what do you mean by stroke?

Stroke (outline) objects on a layer
You can use the Stroke command to automatically trace a colored outline around a selection or the content of a layer.

[Nik]

Stroke (outline) objects on a layer
You can use the Stroke command to automatically trace a colored outline around a selection or the content of a layer.

Oh. I know how to do it. But I just didn't know what you meant my stroke. An outline will look weird on such a thin text.

[IV2B]

I feel like the arrows in the"how it works" section are a little too close to the text, plus the text is kind of "cheap", it gives a friendly feel more than a professional feel ( this can be positive ).

The examples' watermarks are a tad too marked for my taste.

The closing section has blurs that you used nowhere else in the image, it looks like it could use some improvement.

Lastly, in your TOS, i've put two spaces in between "given" and "time", 4th row and the last image, below skype and mpgh PM, is not centered: it's a few pixels to the left.

Hope that helps. =)

[Logic]

Lol. I was going for a happy type of vybe.

i guess you can say that. haha.

but you can still create a "happy type of vibe" with it not being so light.

[Nik]

I feel like the arrows in the"how it works" section are a little too close to the text, plus the text is kind of "cheap", it gives a friendly feel more than a professional feel ( this can be positive ).

The examples' watermarks are a tad too marked for my taste.

The closing section has blurs that you used nowhere else in the image, it looks like it could use some improvement.

Lastly, in your TOS, i've put two spaces in between "given" and "time", 4th row and the last image, below skype and mpgh PM, is not centered: it's a few pixels to the left.

Hope that helps. =)

What do you mean by "cheap"? Also fixed the contact and TOS thing.

I think I'm calling it a day on this design. Thanks for the help everyone.

[IV2B]

What do you mean by "cheap"? Also fixed the contact and TOS thing.

I think I'm calling it a day on this design. Thanks for the help everyone.

Sentences like "discuss how you want the design" and "i send you the file" sound "bro" not "pro", if you know what i mean.

If you said "Once the payment is complete the file will be delivered to you" that would sound much more professional than "i send you the file".

It's not necessarily a negative thing, as i said, it lets the message get through in a friendly manner. =)

[Nik]

Sentences like "discuss how you want the design" and "i send you the file" sound "bro" not "pro", if you know what i mean.

If you said "Once the payment is complete the file will be delivered to you" that would sound much more professional than "i send you the file".

It's not necessarily a negative thing, as i said, it lets the message get through in a friendly manner. =)

Oh lol. Well its suppose to be friendly and happy
Thats why I have the bright colours.