Your grammer fails hard, but besides that, it's pretty decent.
you here and fell the rain fall
tappin on your window pain
daym i better give her a call
for she is what keeps me sane
some perople are weak and others strong willing
some stand back will others fight
and pain is what im felling
for nobody can show you the light
i will put my life on the line
and time any day
it just i aint scared of dyin
so plz just stay
everybody grows old
its a fact of life
nobody can be told
their will always be light
for nobody is perfect
so its alright
thats why i protect
for this is my last night
i will always fight
and for me
i always seem to stray from the light
for i will only be a memory
so never give up
never get down
always stand up
and never get knocked down
i willbe by your side
no matter what goes down
i will guid you to the light
just remember to never frown
Last edited by ShAg123; 01-04-2010 at 05:16 PM.
Your grammer fails hard, but besides that, it's pretty decent.
"I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me."
- Hunter S Thompson
haha thanx i wrote it in 4 mins maybe next time ill spend more time on it lol sorry =(
Wanna have a rap battle for fun?
"I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, violence, or insanity to anyone, but they've always worked for me."
- Hunter S Thompson
well ok start a thread and ill hit it up man