Law Abiding Citizen

[Make My Day]

Ok, must watch best fucking movie i've ever seen...new style of text...=/...testing :
With new style text:
[img]https://img2.pic*****m/8b/78/5e/2537435/0/mpghlac.png[/img]

Without Text:
[img]https://img2.pic*****m/6f/d5/7e/2537440/0/mpghlacnotext.png[/img]

Original:

[Brizingir]

Text..i hardly saw it, add a small, very small outer glow, so it will be noticeable.
Sig looks a bit empty :/
The yellow thing doesnt suit, cuz the sig itself is more a dark style.
Try to blend it a lil better.

[Hyak]

i hate how the effects r only on 1 side
id like it more if u added them on both sides of render
and yea the text u cnt c :O
seems a bit plain but if you added to both sides that could be fixed
well good job anyways

[hotdog393]

Try to add a light source. Also as flash said try to even out your c4d's and clipping masks. I like the text tho. And i noticed it.

[Ryan]

I like the clipping masks, but they seem just a bit too...straight (for lack of a better word).
Make them flow in a direction.
Also, the brushing behind his shoulder just looks out of place...it distracts from the focal point.

[Snape]

its good, but text is bad.

[[MPGH]Liz]

am i blind? i dont see any text at all... oh just saw it.. yeah no text.

[Make My Day]

yeh, i aint got any good C4D's light effects or fractal renders, i agree the Light effect is out of place, the text needs to either be moved or i should mess around with the blending...all i need is a good C4D pack...

[Kamikaze]

If you ever have to look for text for a couple minutes (like myself) then there's definately something wrong.

[Make My Day]

yeh, i must've been looking at my laptop at a funny angle which changed the lighting for the text which made me see it...
i don't see it very well, but the text is nice for simplicity stuff, but im no good at that shit, ima have another go after school.

[Scrcrw]

No text is better
try to make it less one sided
clippoing mask splat looks out of place
because it is one sided the sig looks very bland
a little more blending of the main guy would go a long way
with the blurring u could make the guys towards the front slightly more focused and the ones to wards the back less forcus to give it more realistic depth