gift for kenshiro tatsu on gaiaonline

[taken4time]

v1[IMG]https://i343.photobucke*****m/albums/o450/destructionzone/ghostt3ch.png[/IMG]
v2[IMG]https://i343.photobucke*****m/albums/o450/destructionzone/ghostt3chv2.png[/IMG]


pro's:?
con's:?
suggestions:
changes:

btw... this is just a gift it's not really a "try hard" thing

[Brizingir]

when making a gift, u must make it as good as you can IMO,,,
Renders is too bright and low quality, it doesnt suit the BG, make it darker.
There is a bit flow, good.
Make the text smaller.
Could have used another colors for the BG.
KIU

[taken4time]

thx ali i guess i can make a v2 .-.

[Brizingir]

thx ali i guess i can make a v2 .-.

Make one, include more flow, other colors,darken the render, use smaller text placed near the render.

[taken4time]

Make one, include more flow, other colors,darken the render, use smaller text placed near the render.

mk... maybe i'll add a c4d to "spruce" it up o-o

edit: v2 is up

[Scrcrw]

V1
render is too bright
lq
doesnt blend
there is no flow
the bg colours are bad
V2
Just looks wierd
it doesnt look good
ur text is bad in both
Tips
Work on ur blending and flow
add a light source
make smaller unobtrusive text that blends in more
also if ur gonna make a gift, make it better than u would for urself
also u have this as a gift in ur sigs, those are gifts people make for u not gifts u make for people

[Brizingir]

i agree with scrcw.
V2 looks weird.

But the good things are that the BG and render go well together, i mean they suit. u also added flow.

Read some tuts aand u will improve GJ KIU

[taken4time]

V1
render is too bright
lq
doesnt blend
there is no flow
the bg colours are bad
V2
Just looks wierd
it doesnt look good
ur text is bad in both
Tips
Work on ur blending and flow
add a light source
make smaller unobtrusive text that blends in more
also if ur gonna make a gift, make it better than u would for urself
also u have this as a gift in ur sigs, those are gifts people make for u not gifts u make for people

i see your point.... but i don't get gifts... because i'm not respected... therefore it's no point of making a gifts given to ME list

[Brizingir]

i see your point.... but i don't get gifts... because i'm not respected... therefore it's no point of making a gifts given to ME list

That gift sentence he stole from me D:

[taken4time]

That gift sentence he stole from me D:

how could i steal it from you if i haven't been here in a week?

[Scrcrw]

i see your point.... but i don't get gifts... because i'm not respected... therefore it's no point of making a gifts given to ME list

well i dont get gifts, doesnt stop me making them, just get over urself

[Empire]

.......

1. Don't make Gaia online stuff
2. V2 is better.

[taken4time]

.......

1. Don't make Gaia online stuff
2. V2 is better.

1.It was FOR a friend on gaiaonline... it wasn't GAIAONLINE in general
2. Thanks i'd post v3 but it was too.... pixelated