New Signature

[Cloud Anarchy]

So i made this one today:

[IMG]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled68-70_zpsphgusjbn.jpg[/IMG]

I don't think i am really happy about it....i just like the text i guess :O
(Note: its mostly based from a tutorial i found online i thought it was cool and i wanted to follow it)




Version 2:

[IMG]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled68-70v2_zpsms8ftoex.jpg[/IMG]

CnC is welcomed it helps me improve!

[jiang]

@nick9185GR these are dope as fuck, but i honestly think these can be bit thinner. imho it's a bit too wide for a signature. the one you have as of currently fits just right.

[Cloud Anarchy]

@nick9185GR these are dope as fuck, but i honestly think these can be bit thinner. imho it's a bit too wide for a signature. the one you have as of currently fits just right.

Yeah i know its not that suitable size for a signature but i like it more tbh i have more space to work with.

[Cloud Anarchy]

So here is one more i just finished:

[IMG]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled-68-71smaller%20version_zpsosa1ggy8.jpg[/IMG]


Signature Version:

[IMG]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled-68-71even%20smaller%20version_zpsjq4y95gh.jpg[/IMG]

[Fucking Moron]

I don't understand anything in this tag.
[img]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled68-70_zpsphgusjbn.jpg[/img]

Looks like a big black blob
Some Random metaballs

And some weird lighting

And to top it off the lighting throughout this tag doesn't even go with the lightin gyou have created. :/

Should work on that

[Top Kuk]

CnC is welcomed it helps me improve!

her face coloring is moderately to severely fucked
looks like a nigga took a Los Santos Customs matte paint job and went over her face with it

[IV2B]

It's obvious that the contrast is messed up, just look at that poor girl's face: you edited the image so much that she doesn't have a mouth or nose anymore.
Same thing with her legs, the black line in between her legs is almost dotted now!

The concept is good tho: one strong source of light in the bottom right corner, with one girl immersed in a black cloud.
The text is nice, probably too close to the render tho. What makes it good is the variance of fonts, sizes and colors.
I think the blending is nice.

What and how to improve: Focus on a simple design first and don't overdo it.
When you decided to modify the render's contrast you overdid it, when you chose to add a colorful background you made it more complex.

In fact, the second sig you posted in this thread is better in this regard.

[Trol553]

I don't understand anything in this tag.
[img]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled68-70_zpsphgusjbn.jpg[/img]

Looks like a big black blob
Some Random metaballs

And some weird lighting

And to top it off the lighting throughout this tag doesn't even go with the lightin gyou have created. :/

Should work on that

Dont h8 him lol

[Cloud Anarchy]

I don't understand anything in this tag.
[img]https://i815.photobucke*****m/albums/zz78/CloudAnarchy/Untitled68-70_zpsphgusjbn.jpg[/img]

Looks like a big black blob
Some Random metaballs

And some weird lighting

And to top it off the lighting throughout this tag doesn't even go with the lightin gyou have created. :/

Should work on that

I kinda like the lighting to the right corner the the background was propably one of the biggest mistakes i did here because doesn't fit with the light i created like you said and i knew that unfortunately but the thing that bothers me by far its thats is to bark to the left and it kinda ruins the whole thing.

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her face coloring is moderately to severely fucked
looks like a nigga took a Los Santos Customs matte paint job and went over her face with it

The reason that this happend was nicely explained from this guy @IV2B

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It's obvious that the contrast is messed up, just look at that poor girl's face: you edited the image so much that she doesn't have a mouth or nose anymore.
Same thing with her legs, the black line in between her legs is almost dotted now!

The concept is good tho: one strong source of light in the bottom right corner, with one girl immersed in a black cloud.
The text is nice, probably too close to the render tho. What makes it good is the variance of fonts, sizes and colors.
I think the blending is nice.

What and how to improve: Focus on a simple design first and don't overdo it.
When you decided to modify the render's contrast you overdid it, when you chose to add a colorful background you made it more complex.

In fact, the second sig you posted in this thread is better in this regard.

I believe this is one of the most acurate post till now propably the biggest reason it looks shit its the overedit i did i used soooo many gradient maps for no reason (mainly because the guy on the tutorial did the same) but it didn't end up looking good in my signature....ofc and it wasn't only that i did many more unnecessary editting for no reason on the render and the C4d behind it.

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Dont h8 him lol

Nah its ok i remember him got used of his posts :P.I keep the usefull part mostly xD

[Arrow]

Dont h8 him lol

He is just telling him whats wrong with the image?

[Cloud Anarchy]

He is just telling him whats wrong with the image?

What do you mean by that?@IV2B did the same.Both people did CnC.Which was more suitable and more helpful (<--mark this word) in your opinion?There is a big difference between giving good criticism and bad, the way that @Organized Chaos does it its mostly wrong.I am not offended by him neither i want him to change the way he gives CnC i am just pointing out some facts.

[Arrow]

What do you mean by that?@IV2B did the same.Both people did CnC.Which was more suitable and more helpful (<--mark this word) in your opinion?There is a big difference between giving good criticism and bad, the way that @Organized Chaos does it its mostly wrong.I am not offended by him neither i want him to change the way he gives CnC i am just pointing out some facts.

Idk he may not have worded it very well, but still he stated a fact like your lighting was of and you should work on that

[Cloud Anarchy]

Idk he may not have worded it very well, but still he stated a fact like your lighting was of and you should work on that

I have seen him making CnC before many times to me and to other people.

"I Don't Understand Anything In This Tag.


Looks Like A Big Black Blob
Some Random Metaballs

And Some Weird Lighting"

Stuff like these are close to toxic.Beacuse you don't provide helpful arguments and you just saying in other words: "This is crap i don't like it".Which is COMPLETLY fine but explain me why you dont like, what i did wrong that its not appealing to you.Help me improve!If just want to say its crap don't post at all i can see it myself its not good i know it i didn't post it because i am waiting you to tell me this i just want other persons opinions on what i did wrong.

The only part that was kinda usefull was this "And To Top It Off The Lighting Throughout This Tag Doesn't Even Go With The Lightin Gyou Have Created. :/"
And i am really happy seeing stuff like these because i think about them.And the next time i make something i will try not to make the same mistakes.Thats the point of CnC after all insn't it?

and lets stop talking about this here because we are getting alot out of topic.

[Fucking Moron]

I have seen him making CnC before many times to me and to other people.

"I Don't Understand Anything In This Tag.


Looks Like A Big Black Blob
Some Random Metaballs

And Some Weird Lighting"

Stuff like these are close to toxic.Beacuse you don't provide helpful arguments and you just saying in other words: "This is crap i don't like it".Which is COMPLETLY fine but explain me why you dont like, what i did wrong that its not appealing to you.Help me improve!If just want to say its crap don't post at all i can see it myself its not good i know it i didn't post it because i am waiting you to tell me this i just want other persons opinions on what i did wrong.

The only part that was kinda usefull was this "And To Top It Off The Lighting Throughout This Tag Doesn't Even Go With The Lightin Gyou Have Created. :/"
And i am really happy seeing stuff like these because i think about them.And the next time i make something i will try not to make the same mistakes.Thats the point of CnC after all insn't it?

and lets stop talking about this here because we are getting alot out of topic.

Well let's just say your tag was so bad I didn't even want to CnC

K thnx bai

By the way you're lighting isn't good at all

None of the highlights throughout the tag reflect the light source in the bottom right corner
None of the shadows do either

The lighting that is shown on the metaballs appears the light should be a little higher not below them

And then the background is just literally a black, Idfk what that is lol

You need to define your tag and it's environment so you can create good lighting and have a place for your tag to exist and not in some black hole that looks smudged to hell

[Skvler]

damn this shits dank af, love the style man