real or not

[ShAg123]

real

look in front of you
close your eyes and just zone out
what you feel is it true?
or is it a pigment of imagination brought out?

now open your eyes
you relize what you see
and you start to relize
you only see what you want to belive

now reality is if you see it then its real
but imagination brings out the truth
altho its real what can you feel?
now do you see the truth?

realits is waht you make of it
now imagination never ends
and now to think of it
your imagination never ends.

[[MPGH]Liz]

Figment, Realize,Believe,although,realities... if you're gonna do poetry, make sure your words are done right, or specifically.

[ShAg123]

? Wow ok i did this at like 3 in the morning and only had 3 hours of sleep befor so just lay off a bit ok? and sorry i just wrote it in like 3 mins so yea

[[MPGH]Liz]

just saying, if you want people to take your work seriously, unless you're a "rapper" then the best way is to triple check it, to make sure everything that you want to say its said right. Just a tip, take it or leave it.

[ShAg123]

Well ok ill make sure to use spell check next time

[[MPGH]Luke420]

Ye bud liz is troof