Reach

[Heath]

I'm still working on my new style. I think I've improved a little bit.
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What do you guys think? CnC&Rate.

[Maddoc]

I'm focused on the light close to the planet, which I'm guessing shouldn't happen, because why direct away from the focal, right? I'd rather b drawn to Chief.
Also, your placing on those yellow things resembling the glare (thing) from the sun are a bit off.
I'll give it a 8/10