But Why Me?

[R3V]

you rise, you fall.
you stumble, you crawl.
you bleed, you cry.
you smile, you lie.
i hurt, i scream.
you hope, i dream.
i kiss defeat,
you just repeat.
i play my song
and you are wrong.
i am a star,
not what you are.

[Fabulous1]

Its nice if you add more words. Its like cut-cut-cut.

[CyberGenius]

not bad dont like the ending

[R3V]

me neither, cudnt think of anything else.

[benl]

me too i liked it at the start with the rhythm back an forward but it was a awkward transition in the end

[B4M]

Don't be so harsh, it is pretty good, and the ending it's not that bad!