Fail? Or good? #2 Design

[Comet]

Just comment on it so I know what to do better, I am new to this section and photoshop so

[Spookerzz]

Renders are terrible...

Did this with paint.net?

Try not to erase the render when erasing black if you use my tut

[hotfudge2100]

good concept but try making sure ur not cutting off to much of the render or else the edges looks bad. the background a lil plain too though =/

[Comet]

sorry for this noob question, whats render?

and sorry for the crap stuff and I done it on CS4, I'm new to graphics and shit so..

[hotfudge2100]

well in that picture the renders are the Combat arms character ppls

don't know a definiton for renders =/

[Comet]

I'll post my new one with help from : Fritz Copes ( forgot the MPGH Username ) So thats his skype name here it is :

[hotfudge2100]

that's alot better but the guy on the right's lower body looks a little weird i would try to take that out of pic

[Comet]

alright..

I'm in the middle of making #3 so

[hotfudge2100]

check the one i just made

[Comet]

Will do..

what do you think I shud do for the #3'ed.. like make it gory or like a good signature shit?

[hotfudge2100]

try messing around with background so it don't feel plain

[Comet]

yeh will do.. I'll use like foggy background with like nuke shit