Originally Posted by
Axel
In my honest opinion, this tag isn't even worth a garbage can.
Those white lines surrounding the focal, is distracting my eyes off the people.
Do I need to look at the people? Or do I need to look at the lines? That's the question that comes to my mind when I look at your piece.
Next to that, those little irritating annoying crosses, why are they there?
I think that it's a filler, but, I'm not you, so I don't know.
Next to that, the depth is really badly done.
The background is way over-blurred, and the focal is way undersharpened.
Next to that comes that the focal is too wide. Lessen it to maybe only the faces and the chests of the people?
What I'm missing next, is a light source. Where is it? I can't find it.
If you try to make one in the upper-right corner, you failed. It is hardly seeable.
Another thing I'm missing, is flow and a decent color scheme.
0.0% Flow, and 0.0% color scheme.
And my last point'll be the border, it's too thin for this kind of signatures.
Overall, in my honest opinion, I think you didn't even do much, except the lines, the crosses, and the blurred background.
Is this good? Or do I need to waste more time to some newb?