Just a Lil Somethin

[ben2134]

hey guys, was bored so i made this, tell me what you think =)



Give it a rate =)

[-ParallaX]

2/10 .

[Trianglez]

Try to keep the render as the focal, not the text.

[ben2134]

Try to keep the render as the focal, not the text.

Mmk lol thanks, i tried forever to figure out how to get the text like that, i finally did and i was like yay... win but render focus next time got it thanks =) /yea

[-ParallaX]

its kool RITE AT THE BACK were u cant see it XD lolz

you should try making a sig..
ill most likely give you a shitload of negative comments..
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anyway, work on the text. make it smaller.
let the render go to the middle.
2.4/10

[-ParallaX]

Everything wrecked it.
He just has to move the text, make it smaller.
Make the render bigger, put it in the center.

[ben2134]

any other comments? i will work on that, ty for the advice

[serpentine back-up]

Too blue. It's nice to have blending colors but, not all the same. Try changing the text color. Also have a different color soldier. The colors have to compliment each other though.