Ben2134: LAOTW Entry

[ben2134]

Hey guys, Kamikaze put his up for display, got some comments so i thought i mine as well too, i thought his was nice, and i hope that some people like mine =)



Edit: I Fixed it, i think this one looks alot better

[Empire]

why did you cut the bow? It makes it look worse than you cropping off his elbow.

[ben2134]

i know... i fucked it up and i've been trying to fix it... and the elbow isn't cropped off, it's like that =)

[Trianglez]

Improvement. Keep it up :P

[ben2134]

Improvement. Keep it up :P

Thanks, i'm actually fixing it atm, i messed up in a couple places...

[Trianglez]

Kk, you should work on the lighting, if you want, pm me and I'll tell you my quick lighting trick that legit takes 10 seconds but has a great effect.

[Scrcrw]

the cut off bow is bad

[ben2134]

i fixed it, but i can't edit my LAOTW post to put in the correct picture =(

[Trianglez]

Better. The text could still use the work and you might want to smudge the actual artist signature from the bottom right.

[Scrcrw]

ill let u edit it if u want
doc wont mind

[ben2134]

ill let u edit it if u want
doc wont mind

That would be awesome, do you want me to send you the link? i messed up really bad on the first one, i didn't know till i had the 7th, or i would have worked on it longer lol, since it was friday, i thought it was the deadline =P

[Scrcrw]

just make a new post
ill tell shayne its k