*update* New Rap + Updated Real G

[Mike Shroth]

*Fame*
Life is a lame shame fight for fame its all the same just like
hacks go an get a 6 pack nerds learning all about birds
go fuck a girl go get some friends an maybe buy a
mercedez benz an stop drivin your moms mini van
you god damn golf fan bet you cant even play just lay
on your coutch and watch the game what a shame
or what ever they call it i dont know i hate it
i ate it like it was a sandwitch you little bitch go make
some shit go try n lick your arm pit your wierd your lame
youll never accomplish fame golf wont help neither will
swimming and smokin weed look at micheal felps
you go to school everyone says your uncool u try and
deal with it you wont heal from the abuse they give you
slim sady will come and save you i hope he will to me too
shady i admire you so see this through and help me
you see this too and you dont do nothin ill feel hopeless
like i do most of the time and so useless like kanye hes so
heartless what a mess with the famous people the only 2
good ones are EminEm and Lilwayne whos in jail
he got the nail for a gun on his tour bus that sucks
he was risin up and yo hes got money and same with slim
i just so badly wanna meet him and say how cool he is
i dont know if he realises it but im his #1 fan dude hes the
man i know you might not think so but i do and i hope you
all see this through Like the good people of the united
states just like it says on all yo liscence plates and
were you met all your soul mates you love
So Slim Shady Eminem Marshal Mathers what ever you
want to be called...im callin out to you man im inspired
i get tired of writing these raps and not gettin reconised
for it its a boat load of shit man you know what im sayin
you wont get famous just playin round youll just go down
and get pounded........B.....Eminem man see this through....
#1 fan man
B - D-I-Z-Z-L-E

[Mike Shroth]

*Real G*Updated*
Yo i am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century
I see life as a strategic game all about fame whos to blame.... god .....no that kid named todd
life is hard at points rollin joints you'll make it through bills are like hills your popin pills already ya head is
heavy
one thing you will always know is your mom is bomb she helps you through anything you need
ya dad and her made a seed that was you, i see you through
I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
Money and fame are all so lame its like one big worldwide game
if ya know what im saying...im not playin...obama is ruinin the economy
you all can see the stock market dropped just stopped
hope we will see this through each an everyone of you!
Fagget is a world wide term called to exspecially people with a perm
its not nice it dont smell like old spice smells like some dead ass mice
I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
Yo playa hear what im sayin i told you im not playin
i beat you in the heat of summer try and pull me from her
ill kick your ass and smash your face in the ground
like beef you get mad my girl is sad see what you did
then you ran an hid like a pussy ill punch you
ill kick you ill kill you if you touch my girl again
your like a fukin sin i hate you ill beat you with slate
you fukin no good shark bait peice of shit you smell like a sweaty arm pit
I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
You think your a pimp walk with a limp bring the cane think you hit like a crane
nathan is your name thats not pimp its a shame you fail you so lame
think your in the rap game your not ill put ur head in a pot...of lobsters
still alive pinchin yah head then youll go cry in bed
like a pussy yah a little wussy not a pimp so stop the limp
ya not cool as fat as a oversized wire spool your a tool
not like a playa like a hard as peice of junk to deal with
I am me and as you see i can be the next G of the 21st century!
Ya came out of the woom like zoom had a this is 50 hat on
and baggy cloths why be like that chump go an hump ya lady
not like shady hes my inspiration to write this song
he on top he wont stop no matta what you fools say
hell beat you in the light of day your all gay
eminem the best go burn the hair on ya chest if ya dont like him
then ill come cut off yah limb i am b dizzle not saying to the hizzle like jay z
you see he isnt no good he things hes hood hes not good he sucks so bad
he makes me so mad hes not like marshal mathers he has it made
go put a lamp shade on jay z and turn the light off dont wanna see his fail
ass face no more hes a fucking whore what about kanye at the vma
taylor swift shulda kicked him in the dick hes a fukin prick
he so heartless that little shit he desserves to get hit
go get him slim beat the shit outta him n ill come tear off a limb
Eminem is on top of the rap game he deserves it hes the shit he owns by 8 mile
I am me and as you see i can be the nect G of the 21st century

peace
B - D-I-Z-Z-L-E OUT

[NextGen1]

I'm not a big fan of it, 2 posts of ramble, but not bad.

[Mike Shroth]

k... not really ramble if you get the beat that the lyrics go they are all together good

[вℓυє]

Lol itsa Eminem :P nah jk gj o-o

[xxArchAngelxx]

Lol itsa Eminem :P nah jk gj o-o

I see the resemblance lol psshhh as if

Also about the rap i got as far as 4 words into it and got bored but gj any ways!

[ShAg12345]

ahhhh not to be a douche but it sucked but keep trying man

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well its not that bad but nowherenear awesome keep trying and ide suggest not putting really bright colors and big fonts cuz it makes it look too long and we here at mpgh dont like reading alot ohh and try writing it in lines like in sentances and not paraghraphs it helps to keep beat and know how to say it without a beat or a track hope it helps and best of luck on ur next rap keep posting