Is this poem good for my girlfriend?

[Canadian]

Ive been so lonely, girl
Ive been so sad and down
Couldnt understand
Why haters joked around
I wanted to be free
with other creatures like me
And now I got my wish

Cuz I know that Im a gay fish

(Gay fish, yo)
Mother fuckin gay fish (Im a fish, yo)
Girl I am a gay fish (its alright, girl)
Makin love to other gay fish

All those lonely nights
At the grocery store
In the frozen fish aisle
Feeling like a whore
Cuz I wasnt being true
Even though everyone said
That I had to make a switch (gay fish)

Now I know that Im a gay fish

(Gay fish, yo)
Mother fuckin gay fish (Im a fish, yo)
Girl I am a gay fish (Now where I belong, girl)
Making love to other gay fish

I used to be scared, denying who I was
Actin straight, but then goin out to the gay fish clubs
Dancin with the marlins, makin out with all the snappers
Id take a salmon home and work that caudal fin for hours
But now Im out and Im free to love what I want
Be it yellowfin or bass or that trout in Vermont
I slap that marlin ass, make that grouper butt shake
Ill come to your house and have an orgy in your mother fucking fish tank

Mother fuckin gay fish (Im a fish, yo)
Girl I am a gay fish (Now where I belong, girl)
Making love to other gay fish

I really get around
Im a slut of the sea
When I say I got crabs
I mean it literally
I was eating dinner
And just had to go down
On that mackerel on the dish

Cus Im the gayest of the gay fish

Mother fuckin gay fish (Im a fish, yo)
Girl I am a gay fish (Now where I belong, girl)

But I got to settle down
I cant be a whore
I aint gonna just sleep
With any fish no more
Found me a lover
A brother whos a cross-dressing pike named Trish

And together we are gay fish

Mother fuckin gay fish (Im a fish, yo)
Girl I am a gay fish (Now where I belong, girl)
Making love to other gay fish
rate pls

[WOLFPACK X69X]

idk lost me at been so lonely girl to long for me

[MaryKham]

too many cursing?you think your gf will like it?more romance

[WOLFPACK X69X]

i read 1 little thing and it said im a gay fish dude you fellin ok?

[MaryKham]

not to be mean...
rate 5/10
u can do better.

[fishnchips4T]

Just say this " yo come here babe " im a wee do dacker wid a kidney cracker " and if that fails ya own ya own :P

[Paranormal]

Why you talk about gay fish, in a poem for your girlfriend....

[adakop]

HAHahHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
STILL PISSING MYSELF
and i agree with above
seriously why?
thats something to say to your bf if u were gay xD

[iLanCe]

For those who didn't get it...

Here ya go;D

[MaryKham]

wow o_o, and i thought it was he's poem o_-

[Evelyn]

Lol, How Could you think it was his xD


And By The way, I Don't know why a girl wouldn't like that ish

[Nigg@]

You know what I notice on every rap I always see the words hater wdf? Look I see people rapping everyday but when I do theres the word hater I don't know if your just sayingnthat to make you cool but I don't see anyone hating on you

[Stifmeister]

He's a mother fuckin' gay fish!

[ShAg12345]

this sucks dick but he a gay fish aha

[[MPGH]Killian]

bahaha
gay fishies.