^^ u forgot the bad contrast
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Shifty sexy shit
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I sucks ass now. T^T
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that triangle is taking too much away from the focal, its too big, and the solid color makes it stand out alot.
pentooling on the left of cmyk text is really blehh.
you can do better bro o.o
no real lighting or depth either
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LMFAO i just got lazy bro.
First off, pretty empty, just like 4 main things clumped together, text, pink thing, yellow thing, and render. plus the pink thing and yellow thing are too big yo. they take away from the focal a bit much. the double text + reverse is really fucking up my eyes lol, make one a lower opacity, so it isnt THAT hard to read. xD
cmyk color boxes are meh, i wouldnt really use them, because you can hardly tell its a CMYK piece, considering the render is wearing a purple jacket :P
ink stocks or whatever, are kinda bad, i would take those out, and pentool in better P:
plus the pentool that you did do, is kinda meh, unappealling.
space stocks are okay. but they dont really add much, except for the white speckles in the bg to fill it up a littlee.
light sources. add them P: theres no light anywhere, but the render has lighting of its own. there also seems to be a shadow by his head, it doesnt really work with the lighting of the render itself.
by the way that yellow is looking kind of dull. @.@ the triangle is too big, maybe gradient it and then make like a black shape in it, to kinda even it out. or clip mask, if you want.
depth, there is none currently, really really flat. );
/longassCNC
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ink.. ink stocks.. INK STOCKS ARE HAWT.
I'll definitely consider proportion.
And I suck at lighting. ):
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LOL not +ink stock packs P:
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easy lighting
new layer, solid black.
set it on color dodge
lightly brush with soft brush white.
epic lighting = 100% opacity soft brush on that same layer, and you'll get a supernova P:
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I'll try it.
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yo martin i needs to know wats i need to works on for the next tag in this style
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Shifty sexy shit
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Negative space on the right, big negative black blob thingie on the left, no real flow, you know what the focal is but the effects surrounding it makes me go /, lower down the contrast/brightness maybe. COLORS?!