Wow, this sucks, :L I'm more like eminem
He thinks hes better..
By paul
u mthrfker .. chk out my rythm
wile u fil ur mouthful with jism
kickass rap is ma passion,while fati undie is ur fasion , go fool youv cool,go bak to cum sukr,coz ur the gay hooker
By ME
yo yo chec chec chec ths out
Paul
u got no ball
U call that a rap?
u must be joking because its crap
It aint got no rythm
Its only has ur moms jism
U call me a Gay hooker
But we all know whos the actual cooker
so go back to ur su**king
Because u dont know anythng else thn Fu***Ing
Now re think ur rap
Because u only know how to make crap
::WURD::
my first ever rap /yea
Originally Said By komakazee:
ill give u a runescape account with 99 fishing for ur paypal account
Wow, this sucks, :L I'm more like eminem
I believe your rap is better. Paul, go suck a dick. Jk. x3
leonard208 (07-11-2010)
haha paul you suck but not half bad man
Good fucking lord.
Never in my life, ever, have I seen worse grammar.
It's just as bad as a kid with down syndrome head-butting the keyboard.
ok dude no im srry im not gonna flame or troll but to tell you the truth its not good at all way too short and well no rythm, no flow you talked about jizz too much and since when does sucker rhyme with hooker like wtf im srry but uhm no keep trying write it longer make sure it has flow or idk just dont at all dont let this affect ur confidence on writing shit cuz im not trying to tell you u suck cuz well u do but im not trying to tell you that im trying to tell you that you and paul or whatever need to really read ur own rhymes like do you just write it down and not even check if it rhymes cuz i think thats what you do like im expecting you to try to rhyme balls with testicles next time cuz idk this kinda sucks but well ive been typing too much so yeah try again
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Im not really agressive but i thought that only emos had no emotion and im not emo so i put the first one
im just ur ordinary awesome mexican guy whos MPGH.net username is []D[][]v[][][]D[][]\[],doing ordinary awesome mexican guy whos MPGH.net username is []D[][]v[][][]D[][]\[] things.
''Hacks,what hacks''? *shoots through wall* ''i dont know what your talking about''
rep me cuz im Mexican
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Rap fail
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lol.wtf was that
i dont rap anyway
just tried it
I know he sucks
Originally Said By komakazee:
ill give u a runescape account with 99 fishing for ur paypal account
DUDE of course yours is better , your friend paul sounds like a retard on a good day.
leonard208 (07-31-2010)
And Leonard you look like Jeffrey Star. Go kill yourself fag.