FF Snow

[Brizingir]

After reading all cnc people gave me on my last tag, i made this one, added c4ds, cuz some said it looks too empty without them, hehe..hope its better than the last one.

v1


v2


v3

[Parade]

Much better than the crysis one. I don't have much to say.

[Brizingir]

thanx paramount
Gonna stick more to cnc now

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

U forgot to burn the render edges like Doc said.
Again it looks a bit slapped on.
Don't get me wrong, I like pop focals
but you only want certain parts to pop, not the whole thing.
Lighting could be a bit more balanced.
Maybe have some added behind the render, above shoulders.
Not bad, kiu.

[xsinxzerox backup]

I want dem c4d's u used.

[Brizingir]

I want dem c4d's u used.

i merged like 10 c4ds

[Toshie]

its good but like bawls said...it looks like u just put it on

V1 and V3 .. the difference is the contrast right? ( i cant really tell..i spent 5 mins looking at them)

[[MPGH]Doc]

Could you upload the psd and send it to me. I have some ideas and I'd like to show you where you could improve. I see a lot of potential in this style and I want you to improve on it. So I just want to play around with the psd and highlight where you went wrong, how you can fix certain areas and things you could add to give the extra wow factor

[xsinxzerox backup]

i merged like 10 c4ds

I want dem c4d's that you made glowy

[Empire]

U forgot to burn the render edges like Doc said.
Again it looks a bit slapped on.
Don't get me wrong, I like pop focals
but you only want certain parts to pop, not the whole thing.
Lighting could be a bit more balanced.
Maybe have some added behind the render, above shoulders.
Not bad, kiu.

what he said.


Honestly i like v3 the most, v1 is too dark and b&w with these effects is meh.

It looks just a bit too "background, render, effect"'ish. But not enough to make it horrible.

[Shaadow]

There's a large lack of a light source. Light is coming from several directions.

[Scrcrw]

colour is better
the line thicknesses are better
imo its a little too monotone
the placement of the hexagons needs work
the biggest lose out here is the blending
the render just looks slapped on which doesnt work well
u really need to work on that to get ur tags past nov into low mod

[Brizingir]

There's a large lack of a light source. Light is coming from several directions.

who said it isnt allowed to have many light sources , not just one?

its good but like bawls said...it looks like u just put it on

V1 and V3 .. the difference is the contrast right? ( i cant really tell..i spent 5 mins looking at them)

in v1 the render is brighter in some places, in v3 i burned the render more

[[MPGH]Doc]

Another thing I noticed is in v3 you highlight burned over your hexagons which looks ugly. If you are going to add light sources over the top of e render you need to burn your render layer so that it doesn't "bleed" onto the light sources.

I have shit internet so I won't be able to download your PSD for a while.

[Brizingir]

Another thing I noticed is in v3 you highlight burned over your hexagons which looks ugly. If you are going to add light sources over the top of e render you need to burn your render layer so that it doesn't "bleed" onto the light sources.

I have shit internet so I won't be able to download your PSD for a while.

mmz..okay, as fast as possib, please