Much better than the crysis one. I don't have much to say.
After reading all cnc people gave me on my last tag, i made this one, added c4ds, cuz some said it looks too empty without them, hehe..hope its better than the last one.
v1
v2
v3
Much better than the crysis one. I don't have much to say.
thanx paramount
Gonna stick more to cnc now
U forgot to burn the render edges like Doc said.
Again it looks a bit slapped on.
Don't get me wrong, I like pop focals
but you only want certain parts to pop, not the whole thing.
Lighting could be a bit more balanced.
Maybe have some added behind the render, above shoulders.
Not bad, kiu.
I want dem c4d's u used.
its good but like bawls said...it looks like u just put it on
V1 and V3 .. the difference is the contrast right? ( i cant really tell..i spent 5 mins looking at them)
~Gifts~
Thanks Evelyn for avatar
Could you upload the psd and send it to me. I have some ideas and I'd like to show you where you could improve. I see a lot of potential in this style and I want you to improve on it. So I just want to play around with the psd and highlight where you went wrong, how you can fix certain areas and things you could add to give the extra wow factor
There's a large lack of a light source. Light is coming from several directions.
colour is better
the line thicknesses are better
imo its a little too monotone
the placement of the hexagons needs work
the biggest lose out here is the blending
the render just looks slapped on which doesnt work well
u really need to work on that to get ur tags past nov into low mod
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Shifty sexy shit
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Another thing I noticed is in v3 you highlight burned over your hexagons which looks ugly. If you are going to add light sources over the top of e render you need to burn your render layer so that it doesn't "bleed" onto the light sources.
I have shit internet so I won't be able to download your PSD for a while.