You suck at rapping, just in case your mom hasn't told you.
School didn't work out for me but this rap shit did
only started out as a kid
time to get rid of the past
started up so fast
this new shits exposed like my thoughts are ready to explode
no i don't rob any stores and i don't have any street rep but ill take the next step
be the next biggest thing in town
swear to god there is no way ill be the next fuckin clown
julian and i are gunna make it to the top
we wont stop rapping till we wanna stop
pop you better drop a run that fuckers got a gun
my moma always told me to never look at the sun
cause its way to bright and you might lose your eye sight in the things you love
like driving fancy cars (RIIICCCHHH) why does every 1 in the school talk like nathon odagard you all sound like a bunch of fuckin retards (YEEEAAAHHH OK)
got a bunch of redneck fucks
most of them wake up early and drive big trucks to shot fuckin ducks
ole aunt dolly look in your stew i think i find my missin shoe (yeah that right there thats good eating right there)
() are talking yes we have a kid in our school that talks like that we made this into a cd with other songs to lazy to put them on here
You suck at rapping, just in case your mom hasn't told you.
WOLFPACK X69X (08-02-2010)
i only read like 4 lines.
long is long
when i read it i pictured eminem so it's kind of a fail.
how do you upload the song cause i would like to so you guys can actually hear it
ehh ok ill upload my new shit so you can see how its done aight
It was ok at first. Went to shit at this part "my moma always told me to never look at the sun"
It loosely rhymes, pretty shitty. Oh and it should rhyme but also MAKE SENSE. damn your talking about your mom and shit, not looking at the sun wtf.
Start out as a kid but start out like a bitch
Your rhymes straight out he past, like shit from my ass
Started up real slow
So hoes like you know
when i go and flow
its like meteor show nigga, stones throw
Say you better run that fuckers gotta gun
but you better run cuz nigga you got none
Say its way to bright
better save our sight
so the real mc's can take the spotlight
now rapping against you has been so much fun
might seem like its over but its just begun
when my rhymes touch down they shake the ground
making niggas fall around and bitches stay down.
i know its bad but whatev.
no you just suck =) keep trying tho you may get it eventualy