[WIP] Ink Bubbles (56k Warning)

[Ryan]

So I've got two WIP's for shirts to submit to threadless. They're not nearly finished, but I was wondering if there was anything you all think I could do to make it look better. I've hit a creative wall.
Also, which is better: black tee or white tee?

Last, would you wear it? /

[Bloombox]

OMFG That shit is sexy.
I'd wear the black one.

[Illuminatus]

Damn, they both look really good. I'm not too sure on which I'd wear though.

[[MPGH]AVGN]

Black shirt fosho

[Parade]

Nooo, black tee is too geeky.




I like it man.

[Toshie]

black tee .

[Matt]

Black and White. I LOVE BOTH.

[Ryan]

Thanks guys.
Any tips on ways to finish it off?

[Matt]

A tad too simple. Just a tad though, add another small icon, some dirtyness, etc. Anything along the lines of that.

Also, it's cool just the way it is. It's two styles I'm talking about.

[Ryan]

I see what you mean..
I'm stuck.
Need a way to finish it off.

[+dd.Shift]

if youre gonna make it a shirt youre gonna need a way higher resolution than that O:

add some flare O: make something flowing, idk. lololo

[Ryan]

if youre gonna make it a shirt youre gonna need a way higher resolution than that O:

add some flare O: make something flowing, idk. lololo

That's on their template, so...
I'm thinking of what I should do.
Maybe I'll sleep on it.

[Robert]

I would deff buy the black tee

[Illuminatus]

Mkay, I've made up my mind... I think the white shirts better. And I agree with dragon, you need some kind of an icon.

[Ryan]

I'm gonna put another bubble in somewhere.
Idk where. Or how.
I also think I may put a texture behind it. Maybe some low opacity large versions.
Just for the sake of having more behind it.