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Cat = i like
toxin, lets see your rebuttal
you got 500 characters
Tawksin loses i vote cat
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My rhymes aren’t retard friendly, Let me tone it down for you
Me here , make you go bye bye, Now You get the clue?
This bitch is Afraid Cause I bring that heat, He Wants your Attention
You’re just mad You were Conceived when your parents were Practicing Aids Prevention
Like a leaky faucet, I steadily bring that flow
Another emcee served, You’re better off pulling a “No Show”
Like special Olympics, I’m testin’ your limits and you’re loosing this race
My rhymes are prolific, Compared to your snippets, You’re just a disgrace
"Feeling Yourself" A little too much; Like A Compulsive Masturbator
Must Be a Masochist, Cause I bring that Pain, And He Always Comes back for more.
When I win this battle, there’ll be no room for arguments
Cause With Me Here, You’re More Over Looked, than Google Advertisements.
Excellent battle thus far, One more time Cat ! Let's see how this plays out. I'm excited to analyze these verses.
Cat
/Win/
Last edited by Dark Butters; 10-11-2010 at 05:33 PM.
Bumping this up for entertainment purposes ^^
Just like a nigga, learn how to read
King said 500 words, short and sweet
acting like a wigga, while I take the lead
You should just bow down and admit defeat.
Now I know why you've stepped up your game
Looking at the comments would have made me do the same
Being criticized that you're doing a horrible job
everybody ganging up on you like an African mob.
You're saying that I'm losing the race.
But you're the one the can't seem to keep pace.
Last edited by CaT-; 10-13-2010 at 12:55 AM.
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Reason for my vote
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Cat; You exhibited great knowledge of disses, Your verses were funny each time, and that's what a lot of people look for in a battle. You also had an extremely consistent flow, However in about 3 lines it seemed forced.
Your rhymes used the simplest of rhyme schemes
Word Word Word Rhyme
Word Word Word Rhyme
Now that's not bad, It's just not my style of choice.
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Toxin; You used amazing Multi-Syllabication (This is when more than one part of a line rhymes with another.) You also have flawless wordplay In each verse. However, Your first round sounded forced, And rather weak in comparison to your capabilities. You used a complex rhyme scheme for the most part, In such that many words rhymed with many words.
You lacked in the funny factor, You have a few good punchlines, But they aren't necessarily humorous. Also, In a technical stand point your lyrics are great, but for a rap battle setting I think sometimes People want simple.
Overall I liked Toxin's better because of the complexity, However, Cat You did very nicely.
There's my assessment.
Toxin and Ethereal's battle was better.
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