You know, As mediocre as the lyrics were, This actually has a really nice flow to it. O.o
haters will make me famous(by me) i wont stop ha
every fuckin day i post something u all be vs me and be around me like a ring,i wont give up i will fuck ur minds up with no rub,say i am the worst say i am ugly u r fugly i will fuck u with my dugly!!i meant my dick u stupid prick i wont give ur opinion any respect!! i am proud of myself so fuck everybody else diss me but u wont piss me i love rap so fuck me fuck u fuck yall so same bitch same asshole!! hate my rhyme but 1 day it will be my time to shine yea yea i am from Spain u think i live in a tent and ridin in a camel and dont know mtv channelbut motherfucker i own the world controll panel,i know my english is crap but i am learnin and burnin improvin and movin if u r jealous then u hate me but u cant rate me as tupac said only god can judge me so write ur opinion on a paper and wet it and spit on it and put it in ur ass and sit on smashed glass and burn urself with gas!!
You know, As mediocre as the lyrics were, This actually has a really nice flow to it. O.o
proper spelling would of made this better.
other than that it's okay...
considering i don't listen to much rap.
Spelling.
D:
Thanks Eqlipse6
ehhh crapy shitty but real nice flow just need alot of work on the LYRICS part ALOT other then that nice
Need Better Spelling
this reminds me of Marshall flow really liked it , keep goin ,btw the lyrics in ur sig say im from Egypt and the one in the post says u are from Spain , and your flag is saying u are from canada .... are u incognito?
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Flow is good, the rest needs WORK
not just one paragraph
nice work .
I like the flow, spelling aside that was great. Most people here dont have any flow
That shit was garbage, dont ever use tupac in your rhymes. You know nothing about him nor anything about rap. I think hooked on phonics can you help you with that. <3 fail