I never knew.

[Irony]

Any flame? Im ready, I should get better.

[Thaz]

what's up with the non-chick?
is that your mom?

[Irony]

If you have eyes, you can see its a girl? Are you retarded or what? :l

[Toshie]

Good Lightening, bad font

[Irony]

Good Lightening, bad font

Font is my weakness

[Toshie]

Font is my weakness

it seems like its most people's problem...:fonts

[Zithium]

Looks nice, I like it.

There's quite a lot going on though.

[name13]

Fix the text

[CrazyConservative]

I Agree with the text statements.

I like the lighting though, and how you made the beam go past her hands.

[Dakota]

It looks good its just the text that gets me.

[dddrrr]

nice job,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

[Empire]

Any flame? Im ready, I should get better.

whole thing is shit.

1. The text makes no sense in placement or actual text effects.
2. The render's hand is cut off, so you have some retarded looking render with half its left hand cut off.
3. Much less what they can't see anything as a theme. I mean you just have a bright light with random placement. If what they are "seeing" is a laser shot to the vagina, i think she should be blind.
4.You just put some random C4d's in there too. And you put them OVER the render.
5.What is that green shit on her left arm?
6. Why does the beam suddenly cut off? Why is at that angle?

Honestly its not good at all. The "lighting" is good? Pfft. yeah right.

[name13]

most flaws i found

[CrazyConservative]

[COLOR="Black"]

I mean you just have a bright light with random placement. If what they are "seeing" is a laser shot to the vagina, i think she should be blind.

LMFAO.....

[Robert]

It looks nice at first, but after looking at it for 10 seconds you start to notice the flaws and it loses its appeal.