Soladis's Spiderman [Upadated]

[Soladis]

I worked on my spiderman signature. I added C4Ds and smudged it better for a clearer picture.

[IMG]https://i1195.photobucke*****m/albums/aa384/Soladis/SpidermanInHeavenMPGH2.png[/IMG]V1
[IMG]https://i1195.photobucke*****m/albums/aa384/Soladis/SpidermanInHeavenMPGH3.png[/IMG]V2
V2 Changes: Took off the side borders, put the dust behind him, changed the way of the smudge to get a good sense of direction.
CnC?

[[MPGH]Liz]

It's not bad actually, pretty good for a starter, though i think spider man should be seen a little more. Also the dust in the corner doesn't do much for the piece... but overall much better than most of the beginners i see do sigs.

[Soladis]

lol ty, im having ryguy work with me to increase my skills.

[KABLE]

I don't like to borders on the side. Try getting rid of those and see how it looks. Try putting the dust under the render, also. See how that turns out. Try to make your smudging only go one way too. Like I said last time, it gives it "flow" and looks a lot neater. Other than that, you're really improving. Keep it up.

[name13]

This looks way better than your other shit and I mean shit you've improved your blending

[Ryguy]

10x better. Good work man.

[Soladis]

10x better. Good work man.

Thank you for showing/telling me how to smudge clouds .