In need of criticism

[Da Kurlzz]

well, i was learning sig making for a while. the rest of my other sigs looks fine but certainly not this one.

[IMG]https://i290.photobucke*****m/albums/ll245/XMOONFIREX/Destiny.jpg[/IMG]

idk wad's wrong with it. i ensured the flow was nice. but it still looks fucked.

Ctiticism please, harsh/kind. im from the rez. modding section, so i accept all kinds of criticism.

[Soladis]

Hmmm looks fine but have you tried laying a few C4D's? 8/10.

[Da Kurlzz]

Hmmm looks fine but have you tried laying a few C4D's? 8/10.

tried some at around the focal; the hand. its light blue. not sure how to make it stand out.

[Ryguy]

Mmm kinda basic. And I would move the text closer to the render.

[KABLE]

Not just any criticism, constructive.

[Soladis]

you may also wanna try making it smaller, cause i did that and it made it look better than all my other big ones..

[Da Kurlzz]

Not just any criticism, constructive.

in the rez. section we give..... extreme criticism at times.

Mmm kinda basic. And I would move the text closer to the render.

mmk. thanks. something stills fucks me, maybe the arrows and rectangles?

[Soladis]

mmk. thanks. something stills fucks me, maybe the arrows and rectangles?

Hmm are those arrows C4D's or Brushes?

[Da Kurlzz]

Hmm are those arrows C4D's or Brushes?

not c4d, some brushes and some rectangular maranquee. w/e u spell it...

[Soladis]

yea make it smaller then try a C4D in the background set on Screen or Color Dodge. May Help.

[Da Kurlzz]

yea make it smaller then try a C4D in the background set on Screen or Color Dodge. May Help.

normal or effect c4d's?

[Soladis]

just like a regular C4D that looks like its spraying from the inside out.

[Ryguy]

That would be an effect C4d.

[Da Kurlzz]

mmk i got it.

wad happens if the c4d is too light? background is light soo..

[Soladis]

just switch the effects then. Like the color dodge for example, too light or colorful hit it on screen.