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[Wolfeman]

sup guys i never go to this part of mpgh often enough, so since this is like my 2 time coming here lol i wanna show u my FIRST utube intro with c4d im making a better one right now but ill show u this 1 first

[xxxlovexxx1]

okay for a first try... u can make more lively animations... get going

[Wolfeman]

ok lol here is half of my 2nd try

[Obama]

Good for your 1st and 2nd time. Keep it up

[SjoerdJr...]

I like the second better

[CrustyObama]

Yes, I definitely think the the second one is better.

To me, the camera looks a little fidgety though. Try to turn down on the movement when there's nothing going on

[Jack]

Erm, I think those are AE/SVP. Maybe I'm wrong, but thats what it looks like.

[Paranormal]

Nice Job..

[GRgaergaergaergerag]

ok lol here is half of my 2nd try

YouTube - My Shatter intro

this is better, but the camera movement is not the best

[Crotoz]

What program did you use to make those?

[[MPGH]Thunder]

this is better, but the camera movement is not the best

Agree, The camera should move slower and smoother.

[iRateIslam]

Love them both

-Improvements [dont hate me for this onl way you can get better]:

Make it "special"..."different" than others, make it unique, i've seen both those intros Alot around youtube.

In one word: be more creative.

How? get paper and sketch "unique" ideas onto it, crazy ideas which seem bizare, trust me they end up looking AWSoM3.

[tomwillownyou]

Yes, I definitely think the the second one is better.

To me, the camera looks a little fidgety though. Try to turn down on the movement when there's nothing going on

i totally agree, second ones better. work on the speed of the camera, when nothing is happening, why move the camera much ?