Ok now I'll post my rap on kanye, and the virginity snatcher tonorrow
Whats up with all this take about men
With lyrics like that you can never win
So I'll help you out, hold your hand
Cause I heard your all big fans
And maybe you'll get where I am, one day
I'll guide you, show you the way
But who am I kiddin?
With shit so generic, we know your rippin
You niggas be trippin
Spit so bad, its cripplin
Put down the pen
I'm not jokin, aint no comedienne
Leave it to the big boys
Afterall rappin aint no toy
Knowledge is not power, rather applied knowledge is power.
Who Is John Gault?
Ok now I'll post my rap on kanye, and the virginity snatcher tonorrow
because i didnt put anything down when i first posted, just told him he was stupid
oh son, i think you're gassed you aint the master of shit
oh wait i tell a lie your the master of riding dick
you're going to kill me, mate you sound like a flid
at best you could manage to clone angry german kid
and bash your keyboard like some kinda spastic
i could be meaner but thats just a bit drastic,
and i dont know why i rise to this shit, born with a silver spoon
kanye take a hint and go die with autotune
Effing mid terms yo, ill post my rap next week.
This is bullshit i had my rap and mpgh logged me...
I'll try to write it again tomorrow its midnight now, and it tookme an hour to write it...
triple post
Ok see my shit is real, it comes from the heart since
i stay away from you fake fucks with jealous thoughts
surrendered within crowds, and thats pretty hard to tell apart
When you read these bars you're head with prolly blow into six parts,
or you'll prolly just bust a fart
Who knows who you are behind those computer parts
You might be fat with a six pack of flapjacks
But having sick raps cant cover the fact
that your a modern day victim to quicksnacks
You wanna get rid of your big mass,
you big bitch ass you should switch to slimfast,
or start joggin before your weight outlasts
Kanye your so fat you dip big macs in tic tacs
Eat that
You have to understand who i am fam
Im a grown man
Your a kid, u never lived on your own god damn,
Your parents pay for your phone plan, even your home man
I should drag ur punk ass back to my homeland,
and beat your head into the ground, until you appreciate
the meaning of being a grown man
Your lines arent enough for my attention span
You're gay, child's play like candyland
Me dead in a van?
See i'll rip through your inner core with the force of a winterstorm
My squad will raid your house, no matter if your rich or poor
It'll be like an old school game show with the way we'd be picking different doors
And hip hop aint dead it just lives in the north until
this rapper came and it died a little more
Boy this is the end
Im about to get mean, and make you cry like your ten
Fuck you then, i hope your miserable for the rest of your life and u never have fun again
I hope your newborn dies of a fever of 1hundred and ten
and your wife fucks every last one of your friends
ehhh i was expecting better it was ok tho =)
Sid contacted me about this, I am aware this is complete I will be getting a poll and such together soon.
Poll is up
Even though this tournament didn't go too well due to domain issues and no shows, we're ending this properly. I refuse to see people's work go to waste.
Tournament v.2 will be up shortly.
Voting
Please fill out the following form (Not required but helpful to the contestants)
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Wordplay:
Flow:
Lyrics:
Metaphors:
Humor:
Punchlines:
General Effect:
Extra Comments:
Wordplay: Tie
Flow: Sid
Lyrics:West
Metaphors: meh
Humor:West Legacy - ill concieved oregnancy
Punchlines:Sid
General Effect:Sid had some more sting to it...
Extra Comments:I vote for SidTwist
Both did good...
Last edited by Based God; 01-14-2011 at 09:04 AM.
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Polo™ (01-15-2011)
I liked Kanye a bit more but Sid wasent bad either