new siggy

[little-man]

cnc plz i know i suk

[Ryguy]

You need things to blend together not just paste things here and there.

Colors dont match the render.
This style and this render do not go well together usually.
Text needs a lot of work.

Not bad effects and stuff but they're not appropriate with this piece.
*Also some other things I would suggest you take into consideration for future:
-Do not apply blending effects to your render.
-Try and fix edges on stocks, places where things just cut off.(the green part)

[little-man]

i hate this style now i need some tuts... cant find any good tuts...

[Ryguy]

That tut wasn't a style.

[Krypton1x]

I think it's good for a first one.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Ok lemme give you some tips.

tip #1

Don't call your work "siggy"
I automatically assumed that I would click a link, and find shit.
Guess what? I found shit.

Prove me wrong next time.

Don't know what you did to the focal, but it looks like jagged testicles.
Lower your contrast, work on depth, read some tutorials.
Also, don't add text until you understand text composition and the rule of thirds.
Never call it a "siggy" again.
If you do, I will be back. With typed poo poo as my ammo.

[Krypton1x]

Ok lemme give you some tips.

tip #1

Don't call your work "siggy"
I automatically assumed that I would click a link, and find shit.
Guess what? I found shit.

Prove me wrong next time.

Don't know what you did to the focal, but it looks like jagged testicles.
Lower your contrast, work on depth, read some tutorials.
Also, don't add text until you understand text composition and the rule of thirds.
Never call it a "siggy" again.
If you do, I will be back. With typed poo poo as my ammo.

That was cold.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

That was cold.

That's what I do. Guarantee his next stuff will look better though.

Ya'll don't like it..well I can unzip my pants and reveal my mighty mushroom of love

[DylanOwnsYou]

uhm, as said in first post, I agree with that, but also, your render looks choppy to me... unless it's just me noticing. Otherwise, yeh, effects and color, but gj for first

[Fjsieb]

thats not a first thats prototype

[Paradox]

thats not a first thats prototype

What youre making no sense. And this is probaly a 2nd sig ir somethig

[Fjsieb]

Didn't he say that he was you banned

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Dear little-man.
I really see no blending. A really bad small smudge.
Resource/C4D Spam. And text is truly bad.
Keep on working.
Regards,
Android