[2.0][Text] Jester868 VS. J Miliam

[J Miliam]

School? On sunday?

[Based God]

*Bitch u think can rhyme?
Man keep up with the times.*
That stuff was shit. *
My raps so fresh you'll need to take a rest. Face it bro, your second best. You can't blame your defeat on the color of my skin. Because on the inside were all akin. Boy you can't talk smack, when you so fat you can't even fit into a compact. I may take a while but I do it in style and that's enough to compensate me being late. Eve I apologize, but as you watch him face his demise I guarantee it'll please the eyes as he falls into the tunnel of despair and he realize his raps in disrepair and just gives up. I have too much fluff? well then its gunna get rough because I'm not done, I'm just getting started now let's see what you got.*

Meh. Not very good, I'm kinda tired.
And yes school on sunday.

[J Miliam]

Wack as shit, I really gotta say.
What do I rate that? Less than an ok.
I'm feelin pretty raw, I'm feelin kinda ill.
Comin at you crazy, gotchu runnin to the hills.
Anti-depressants, lots of medication, pills.
Leave you bloody as a mug, but I never kill.
Hear me comin down ya block,
Pow pow pow, I got that glock.
Leave ya hood all lookin shocked.
Never down, I stay up top.
It's that shit they really feel.
Never fake, always stay real.
Like I said, I never kill,
Got dudes for that, even meek mill.

Well damn doesn't that suck ass. Try going to the next line after a bar. Easier to read, like mine is. I can't even find your flow, I'm just reading what you say.

[Based God]

Wack as shit, I really gotta say.
What do I rate that? Less than an ok.
I'm feelin pretty raw, I'm feelin kinda ill.
Comin at you crazy, gotchu runnin to the hills.
Anti-depressants, lots of medication, pills.
Leave you bloody as a mug, but I never kill.
Hear me comin down ya block,
Pow pow pow, I got that glock.
Leave ya hood all lookin shocked.
Never down, I stay up top.
It's that shit they really feel.
Never fake, always stay real.
Like I said, I never kill,
Got dudes for that, even meek mill.

Well damn doesn't that suck ass. Try going to the next line after a bar. Easier to read, like mine is. I can't even find your flow, I'm just reading what you
say.

I'm doing most of this on mobile, so I write it in the notes then c+p it to this thread. I did go to the next line but it doesn't take it when I copy paste it. what was it that. Sucked?

[J Miliam]

In the notes on a bb, if you copy n paste it all the way down, it should transfer the gaps. And by sucks ass I meant the sunday school.

[Evelyn]

One more round to open judging for this match! Please complete it soon.

[J Miliam]

Waitin for him.

[Based God]

Waitin for him.

Sorry having some trouble with my Ipod...
Will have it posted soon...

[J Miliam]

Take your time. I gotta come up with one too

[Anonymous868]

Sorry for the delay...
I live in Texas and we've been having rolling blackouts.
I also busted my chin on the ice today and got 9 stitches...
I might be a while before I'm able to post my 1/2 finished rap...

[Anonymous868]

Boy put you mouth on the curb because I aim to disturb.*
I don't have much to say, just keep the boredom at bay.*
Boy your words they make me snooze.
*All your rhymes are overused.*
I could take a nap with that rap.
And in a snap you've lost, it's all over just quit.*
You're unfit to rap it makes me cry to see such shit spew from your mouth. My turns done and I leave you with a question to lurk in your mind. How do magnets work?

Yea. It sucks, but I don't feel good and I wanted to get it done.
Thanks for the opportunity eve, and thanks j for the great competition.

[J Miliam]

Fierce competitor, I must admit. Gimme a second to write mine.

[J Miliam]

Act ghetto if u want, u gonna be the first to die.
I'm ridin in a beamer, while u flyin sky high,
With the wings of an angel, you get sent tell hell.
You hit the golden gates, and then yo ass fell.
Man you so unlucky I ain't a pacifist.
If I was, you'd be happy, but I'm passin fists.
Rippin you to shreds with that ak47.
Leave you smellin worse than the dude at 711.
Killin you with rhymes,
You know I'm bout it all the time,
Flow faster than most,
And I ticket it like fines.

Short one I guess.

[Based God]

Now we wait for Eve to start the poll...
GJ J Milian...

[J Miliam]

Gj Genesis.