my Cinema 4D intro

[gwegsdggdsf]

hey guys here is my first cinema 4d intro i plan to make it better but the rendering takes a cr*p load of time

but anyway here it is

EDIT: i have know clue if the video for youtube works so here is a link

[CrustyObama]

That's a good first intro. The camera movements are very smooth, and you used some tasteful perspective as well. The right music ought to make this a decent way to start your videos.

[Lonesome Cowboy]

Sound makes it mh... activer.

I think it's important to begin work with sound, when you begin working with animation...
My thought, no offence.

[dadavid2009]

mhh nice very nice

good luck

[--ExoTic]

Its looks really good, I know its not finished, but when Its zooming in, You should put up a picture, or a Heads up on what the video is on.

[Jailbroken671]

very cool indeed

[Hassan]

Very cool. I like it.

[SteamAss]

Awsome first intro =D

[termometr]

if it is your first intro , it is very nice

[Tony...?]

Looks great, good luck on finishing it

[Margherita]

Looks nice. Use a gradient/ metal background I think it would look a lot better. Nice job on your first one.

[HW$%yh5eh5ea5heheh5]

really good for your first intro

[leoisso]

not bad cool!

[iKiLLYouCro]

Very Nice.
Find some sound for it

[Moto]

Not bad liked it