Hurp........ Siggeh [Expose]

[Roxter]

Rate.

[Decobez]

@Roxter'
the render is fucking sick
But... u need to add more stuff
GJ overall

[Roxter]

@Roxter'
the render is fucking sick
But... u need to add more stuff
GJ overall

I could have buttfucked it with more c4ds and then munched its shit by blending it... But I prefer being straight. lol, anyways, I don't think I will really add anymore shit to it. It already looks clustered.

[Scrcrw]

way too blurry all round, render needs sharpening

[[MPGH]Austin]

ugh, horrible.


reevaluate your whole process.

[Decobez]

@Roxter
yaaa man u need some lighting or some effects
it looks like it is only a reneder wid a c4d

[Roxter]

way too blurry all round, render needs sharpening

Already sharpened. The render is a comic book render. You can't expect the best quality in the world. As for comment below yours, I am sorry you feel that way, I thought I did OK.
Also @Decobez well I did more than that, but if your opinion of it is shitty and it looks like I did nothing, I did a bad job of creating the signature, and I apologize for submitting another piece of shit into this world. And no I am not being sarcastic. If it really does look like that, then i really did do a terrible job at creating the signature.

[Decobez]

well it is prettu kewl so GJ

[Ryguy]

Needs better lighting.

[Rasta]

nah i like it

[Roxter]

Needs better lighting.

I tried in a few ways but I would like to know more, so please tell me if I missed any.
I: (for all of these obviously I set a blending mode)
1. Used a gradient map
2. Used filter>render>lighting effects>omni>etc-mysettings ;D
3. Took a very, very, light yellow watch (close to white) and put it where I want my light to come from.
4. In my smudging and blending process used both colour dodge and linear dodge to increase the light around the render and to create a focal point.
So please tell me if there is anything else I could do, I really want to learn more techniques.

[Keroaplt]

I tried in a few ways but I would like to know more, so please tell me if I missed any.
I: (for all of these obviously I set a blending mode)
1. Used a gradient map
2. Used filter>render>lighting effects>omni>etc-mysettings ;D
3. Took a very, very, light yellow watch (close to white) and put it where I want my light to come from.
4. In my smudging and blending process used both colour dodge and linear dodge to increase the light around the render and to create a focal point.
So please tell me if there is anything else I could do, I really want to learn more techniques.

If you want to be a cool kid you need to use a minimum of 9 adj. Layers plus burn and dodge
Nah it looks appealing but its not all that good the lighting as said needs some work

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

I tried in a few ways but I would like to know more, so please tell me if I missed any.
I: (for all of these obviously I set a blending mode)
1. Used a gradient map
2. Used filter>render>lighting effects>omni>etc-mysettings ;D
3. Took a very, very, light yellow watch (close to white) and put it where I want my light to come from.
4. In my smudging and blending process used both colour dodge and linear dodge to increase the light around the render and to create a focal point.
So please tell me if there is anything else I could do, I really want to learn more techniques.

Son,
no need to reply with all the things you did.
bottom line is that the final outcome wasn't all that desirable and there are some areas to work on
Smile, nod, and keep at it.

Imo colors could be better, I think you have far too many elements at work here, and they seem to clash with eachother.
Harmony is key.

Lighting is an issue for a lot of people,
if you want to get good at it then look at pro photographs that contain natural lighting. This will give you an idea of how to compose this type of effect in your own work. There are many techniques for lighting.
I prefer soft brush and blur techniques.

[Decobez]

was that your first sig>?<

[Roxter]

was that your first sig>?<

Nope. I've been at it for around a year now.

Son,
no need to reply with all the things you did.
bottom line is that the final outcome wasn't all that desirable and there are some areas to work on
Smile, nod, and keep at it.

Imo colors could be better, I think you have far too many elements at work here, and they seem to clash with eachother.
Harmony is key.

Lighting is an issue for a lot of people,
if you want to get good at it then look at pro photographs that contain natural lighting. This will give you an idea of how to compose this type of effect in your own work. There are many techniques for lighting.
I prefer soft brush and blur techniques.

I just wanted to learn more techniques, and yes. I will take your advice.