Good:
+Flow
+Blending
+Effects (Needs more work..)
Bad:
-Its LQ?
-Text Placing
-His face is too bright.
First of all to fix LQ,just use topaz?
Next,text should be closer to the focal.
Those "butterflies" that go over his stomach,could have been deleted.
Play with Curves..
Imo,keep it up,bro.