Focus on the nose, sharpen it a bit; and the face should be less large. My opinion.
Good job anyway!
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this is the first anime "thing" i drew in my life, 2 days ago i started learning to draw like a maniac and this is the level i got to now..
3 days ago i was drawing people out of rectangles.... ;o
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PS: i messed on the left eye, it was alright but i thought id make it better... then the eraser went to hell.
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the eyes them selves are good and if you hold your hand infront of anything but the face it looks like you should have drawn the other way due to its depth. don't matter i did that once though i discarded it.
for i forget you are doing the same thing i did wrong first you want to create that hair abit to big on the fore head if you try less ammount of hair its easier to shade and it makes things more clear. last thing is that the head actually is 50-75% smaller then the size of the hair.
So basicly it will kinda look like this not?
Last edited by Kuro Tenshi; 05-09-2011 at 05:06 PM.
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add a unicorn horn to it
seems like allot of effort till you can do that -sarcasm-
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come on you know that don't want to push that ordinary button
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lol go get it back! Kill ur teacher! Xd
I want to see that unicorn guy.
Maybe work on the hair and the body, its like big head normal size body.