Magna Carta

[artemon]

[IMG]https://i1225.photobucke*****m/albums/ee383/Artem_Cher/Signatures/sotw205-1.jpg[/IMG]v1

SOTW entry for other website. Theme was "Vertical".

I used a Magna Carta render, I have a couple of them, and they are just siickk.

Inspired by the glow style of Dr. Vegas (and his bro's)


Feel free to comment.

[IMG]https://i1225.photobucke*****m/albums/ee383/Artem_Cher/Signatures/sotw205v2.jpg[/IMG]v2

[Faux]

Get rid of the black and yellow bars. They make it look horrible.

Other than that, its alright. 7/10.

[artemon]

Get rid of the black and yellow bars. They make it look horrible.

Really? I thought it gives a nice touch, instead of a border.

Anyone else think I should remove it?

[Ryguy]

Ruins the depth. Other than that I would say due to the characters of the render I would add some sort of dominant light source towards the top. Seems like theres no glow where there's the most light on the render.

[Keroaplt]

its aight
yeah those bars need to go or if you want to keep them they need to be a different color the need to be thinner and the need to be placed better its pretty nice tho

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its aight
yeah those bars need to go or if you want to keep them they need to be a different color the need to be thinner and the need to be placed better its pretty nice tho

They definitely need to be thinner at the very least. But otherwise I think it's pretty gewd

[artemon]

Thanks for the CC guys

v2 added.

[DarknessLights]

V2 looks better, without the weird bars, and the lighting looks better too.
8/10 .

[artemon]

Thanks. Submitted the v2.

Let's hope this one will be a winner

[Mokou-Sama]

V2 defnitily better. 9/10