Get rid of the black and yellow bars. They make it look horrible.
Other than that, its alright. 7/10.
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SOTW entry for other website. Theme was "Vertical".
I used a Magna Carta render, I have a couple of them, and they are just siickk.
Inspired by the glow style of Dr. Vegas (and his bro's)
Feel free to comment.
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Last edited by artemon; 05-12-2011 at 04:38 AM.
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Get rid of the black and yellow bars. They make it look horrible.
Other than that, its alright. 7/10.
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Ruins the depth. Other than that I would say due to the characters of the render I would add some sort of dominant light source towards the top. Seems like theres no glow where there's the most light on the render.
its aight
yeah those bars need to go or if you want to keep them they need to be a different color the need to be thinner and the need to be placed better its pretty nice tho
Thanks for the CC guys
v2 added.
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V2 looks better, without the weird bars, and the lighting looks better too.
8/10 .
Thanks. Submitted the v2.
Let's hope this one will be a winner
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