Simple smudge

[Obscene]

hey guys, here is my latest.
its pretty simple, but i like it
CnC

[Faux]

Its a nice start, im not going to lie.

-Random smudgeing in the top right needs more work to it.
-Try adding a few soft brush lines adding to the flow, then set those to linear dodge and smudge them
-Add to the lighting on his shoulder a bit more.

Honestly, this is a great attempt

7/10.

[Ryguy]

The colors of the background don't really feel right with the render.

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

It's really good, but I don't like that random black collision in the upper right corner and in my opinion you chose a bad render to work with.

[Faux]

It's really good, but I don't like that random black collision in the upper right corner and in my opinion you chose a bad render to work with.

If your going to say the render is bad, at least say why...

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

If your going to say the render is bad, at least say why...

It's not that it doesn't fit the smudging, but the guy has a weird face expression and the tattoos are stupid.

[Obscene]

It's not that it doesn't fit the smudging, but the guy has a weird face expression and the tattoos are stupid.

He is a bawss.

[H3ARTbreaker]

From my point of view, the smudging leads your eyes away from the focal, rather than towards it -___-

what everyone else think?

[Nexulous]

more blendy blendy everywhere

[Scrcrw]

around the render is all fucked up yo

[Rinzler]

Its alright, the smudge in the right corner up top is weird and Oli Sykes is the greatest, ujelly?

[Mokou-Sama]

if the backgroung was a spiral, it would be better. 8/10