SOTW 8 feedback

[MrKush317]

[IMG]https://img.photobucke*****m/albums/v410/garyemmitt/sotw8.png[/IMG]

to me, im done and ready to enter it, but i wanna see what yall think before i post it as my entrie

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

You can't enter this now since you posted it for cnc.

You enter first in the entry thread then you are allowed to post here in the showoffs.
Read the rules next time.

[MrKush317]

well shit, well guess its back to work lol ty man

edit: ive read the rtules and it doesnt say i cant post it in CNC before entering...if you could point it out so i kno...i read the whole SOTW 8 post and didnt find it...@Ethereal

Theme:Freestyle

Rules

NO ripping
NO begging for votes
NO asking for votes
One Entry per person
Premade signatures are NOT allowed
You may not win back to back challenges
All entries are final
Your entry must be easily seen as fit for the theme, no hidden meanings or massive explanations


Regulations/Restrictions

The size may not exceed 450x250 (width x height)
PSD files must be kept


You may post your entry in the Showroom to receive critique on how to enhance your piece to give you a better chance of winning.

Deadline: June,11 2011

Discussion Thread
All questions, concerns, comments...Anything that is not an entry
and about this weeks SOTW challenge should be posted in the
Discussion Thread.


REWARD
The reward for the 1st place winner will be 1 month of free VIP status.

**Once this thread is closed the GFX team will begin analyzing the entries as to whether they fit the theme and meet the requirements**

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

well shit, well guess its back to work lol ty man

edit: ive read the rtules and it doesnt say i cant post it in CNC before entering...if you could point it out so i kno...i read the whole SOTW 8 post and didnt find it...@Ethereal

Eh this is new to me I didn't think you could post in showroom first...

Kinda gay rule imo but w/e..

you're all set than.

[MrKush317]

ty for helpin me thou any feedback would be nice

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

K well your render looks squished and doesn't blend in the greatest.
Seems kind of Low quality in a few areas, text is plain.. and I notice some premade brush spam.

[Mokou-Sama]

I think it very good.
Downpoints are: girl aint blending well and pic is kinda distorted like, uu stretched too much.
EDIT: Didnt read Eth's post above, its basicly the same...

[MrKush317]

k ty guys, with that being said i might have to retry on my entry

[Black Eyed Peas]

First of all, you used a stock I used. That is against all the rules of sanity. joking
It seems like you crushed the render. The render also doesn't seem well blended. Monotone colours.. Barely any effects...There's no "wow"

[Cynic]

K well your render looks squished and doesn't blend in the greatest.
Seems kind of Low quality in a few areas, text is plain.. and I notice some premade brush spam.

YEAH!! predmade brushes for the win!!

[Ryguy]

You may post your entry in the Showroom to receive critique on how to enhance your piece to give you a better chance of winning.

Uhh Lmao @Ethereal.

[[MPGH]Ethereal]

Uhh Lmao @Ethereal.

I know..we already established this Ryguy.

[Ryguy]

Oh my bad haha. The only reason I'm letting people do that is so they can actually have a chance to win and also get them more familiar with the section.

[apeguy]

Oh my bad haha. The only reason I'm letting people do that is so they can actually have a chance to win and also get them more familiar with the section.

I personally think its kinda "cheating" if you know what i mean

[ogkush317]

just another i threw together

[IMG]https://img.photobucke*****m/albums/v410/garyemmitt/sotw8-2.png[/IMG]