not quite done

[Saboteur]

any tips to make it better? :\

[FUKO]

Can't tell if tits are showing or not

[Saboteur]

tits are not showing.

[[MPGH]Doc]

A little bit more contrast. Perhaps some water droplet textures, I think they'd look quite cool.

[Haze]

It's very simplistic I guess you could say, could do with a bit more added to it.

[Saboteur]

It's very simplistic I guess you could say, could do with a bit more added to it.

i said "give tips to make it better", did i not?

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

Remove that orange lightning flare on her cheeks, it makes her face look like it's deformed.

[Ryguy]

The text is a bit awkward and the orange thing as said above looks like ear muffs at first glance. Other than those few changes I'm not sure as to what to add although it does feel lacking.

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

As Ryguy said, misses a lot of things, but nothing comes up to my mind that would make it looks better or fill it up in general. Just change that font, use some more elegant font, but not too fancy one. Maybe even bigger font would do it.

[Ryguy]

I would maybe add something for her to be looking at but that would require a larger canvas.

[Takari]

I don't like the brushes on her face.