Try to fill up the background as much as possible, and also clean up the tag since it seems messy and LQ. Looks like it also needs some finishing, just add a gradient layer and set it to lighten.
Weren't you here in the GFX section before?
Don't know what to do now, need some advice other than the thing I notice (but can't seem to figure out what to do)
Lighting on Render
Empty Space on right side
Back left side of render doesn't click well with the C4D.
Can't believe I actually took the time to read a tutorial. cheers
Try to fill up the background as much as possible, and also clean up the tag since it seems messy and LQ. Looks like it also needs some finishing, just add a gradient layer and set it to lighten.
Weren't you here in the GFX section before?
I've shared some shitty non-tutorial work before, only like 1 or 2 tags, and joined about 2 SOTW's but those were crap work, only my abstract image was pretty good but Tinypic deleted it T_T.
Filling up the background as much as possible? personally, i don't like things cluttered , not my style.
already have a gradient layer, but i put it at like 18% opacity
if you have teamviewer i can help you out with that ...
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Nigg doing tags
It looks pretty sick man
I'm not really ambitious about this stuff, so I like it.
Just try to fill it up some more.
@Jabuuty671
Try adding a fractal or a sparkle/stars C4D on the right side, just make sure it goes with the flow. Just experiment and see what happens!
Can I have your PSD? Just wanna check what you added to it.
And are you sure this is your first sig?
Last edited by ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y; 06-28-2011 at 11:45 AM.
Nigga needs to use more than one gradient map
Use like 6 make small changes until you get he look right
Nice.
Pretty good job for the first.
Try making it more interesting .
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edit: I've been using Photoshop for like almost 3 years now on and off, but only made like less than 10 tags before, and those were horrible because they were always just 1 render and a downloaded font and I whored the Filters. I always shyed away from tags though because I do prefer commercial graphic design (logos, etc but i said... what the hell, this'll help me learn more parts of photoshop
@Keroaplt
What small changes would those be, like some effect layers, lighting tweaks, some small fractals / C4D's? Vector brushes ? what what =/
@Takari
what to add
Last edited by Jabuuty671; 06-28-2011 at 07:23 PM.
ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y (06-29-2011)
Mostly just lighting adjusments and making it more vibrant because it looks a little dark and dull
Jabuuty671 (06-28-2011)
. will revise it later today thanks.