Generation Y Poster/Calendar

[Haze]

Work in progress. Oh and probably 56K warning.

Just a calendar/poster thing I have to do for my Design class at school. Was done in one sittin of about 4 or 5ish hours of planning, drafting, gathering resources and putting it all together, still needs touch ups and I'll probably play around with the layout.



Or here: https://1337haze.deviantar*****m/art/G...aphy-215907391 looks much better magnified on there than it does at full size on here.

It's supposed to be A3 sized but I scaled it down 50% otherwise the PNG is 22MB and i'm not going to wait for that to upload T_T The PSD is over 600MB which is why the file is so big too, even scaled.

Comments and help appreciated, I'm off to sleep now

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

One word: awesome!

[Keroaplt]

Drops too choppy on the car
I like the haze touch you gave it with the bright ass colors and brushing
The car looks weird to me everything is tilted to the side yet the car is completely leveled
Cool typography tho

[Parade]

It looks really nice, but if this were to be my calendar, I'd throw it away. How am I suppose to know the day of the week is? And where's day 19, 20, and 23?

[aragarof]

Nice, looks awesome.

[Haze]

@Parade it's not exactly supposed to be a practical calendar, more of a fancy looking poster with numbers stuck on somewhere so you can call it it a calendar. Oh and 19, 20 and 23 are blended in with the background D: guess I'll have to fix.

Thanks guys

[Parade]

@Parade it's not exactly supposed to be a practical calendar, more of a fancy looking poster with numbers stuck on somewhere so you can call it it a calendar. Oh and 19, 20 and 23 are blended in with the background D: guess I'll have to fix.

Thanks guys

Well then that is a very nice looking poster.

[Mokou-Sama]

Its awesom. Unfortunately there is only one bad thing: the car pops out a bit too much.
Or maybe thats just me. Its still awesome though

[Mrvica]

its really nice i like it

[Faux]

The paint drops should be fixed. They are dripping diagonally, which makes no sense at all. Try making them drip vertically down the poster. If you want to keep them diagonal though, at least just fix up the drips on the car since they are not very parallel to the other ones.

[Lonesome Cowboy]

Very nice composition!
It's awesome.

[Haze]

@Faux woah totally didn't think about that o_o

They look weird to me now hahahah, I'll fix them up. Thanks!

[Scrcrw]

the drips are really choppy, and as faux said should drip down