Better abstrcat shit (but worse...)

[Keroaplt]

I know this is way worse than the other one composition wise but i think that im at least going in the right direction with the less flat feeling
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[apeguy]

Not worse, just less work done. I can't cnc this 'cause idk what else to improve in pentooling.

[Keroaplt]

Composition wise*

[Ryguy]

The background of the pattern blends with the background of the entire piece so it looks a bit awkward being cut like that.

[artemon]

Definitely better colors and more placed pentooling.
The round brushes are a no-go for me.

Try maybe adding a tighter core in the middle, that has consistent light from within

Very nice so far, kiu.

[Storm]

its not good compo wise, it feels al bunched up and like a half shattered box.

you need more too it in my opinion.

[Nexulous]

right direction. more pieces pl0x

[Parade]

Looks like imploding shit. No jk, I can't really tell what it is though.

[ARHQA$Y$YW4AYG4y]

I'm not familiar with this kinda shit, looks good but again looks weird.

[AdamBoon]

Better placement than the previous one.
But it was completely ruined by the pop art style centre piece, the colours are completely wrong and just completely draw your eye to it. Where-as we should be paying more attention to the foreground pieces.

All in all it just looks a bit bare at the moment, like you started it and just rushed to post it up. Take alot more time with it, add some decent lighting and it could turn into something nice.